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 Pseudacris brachyphona: Mountain Chorus FrogYou're Beautiful And You're Strong-ybe2106DC059

Joy of living should pulsate in your veins like blood
Joyous time is when spring laughs, expectations fulfilled
Creation of self delusion is boundless
You discover insecurity and admits uncertainty
An orchestra I play second fiddle
The limits are indifferent, discover opportunities
Unfamiliar fruits keep your cool
We climb the mountain trying to create order and safety
In myths pond I glimpsed an image of a slimy frog
Kiss it ~ you can try








22.04.2016
Sun :)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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Date: 4/30/2016 2:41:00 PM
I simply lack words and compliments for this fine piece and for this I say.... Blessed art thou whom pens a glorious piece with expressive lines and touching words... For the thee, I add to my profound group of favourites. A definite 7!
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Date: 4/26/2016 9:53:00 AM
Nice write Sunshine. Go out and live life and create your own destiny.
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Date: 4/27/2016 4:25:00 AM
- James, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/26/2016 8:35:00 AM
Very adventurous and positive, I really like the opening line of joy of living pulsate in your veins like blood. we should all have that feeling all the time ! :)
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:48:00 AM
- Casarah, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/25/2016 2:28:00 AM
beautiful metaphor and I aslo love the thought of spring laughing... the imagery of kissing a toad sure made me smile:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:47:00 AM
- Jan, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/24/2016 9:27:00 PM
Very unique way of finding joy of life...Lovely....Dear Anne
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:46:00 AM
- Anand, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/24/2016 5:10:00 PM
what a great metaphor for embracing new things, kissing that slimy frog. VERY unique and COOL poem, Sunshine.
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Date: 4/26/2016 8:45:00 AM
- Andrea, thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/24/2016 4:00:00 PM
intriguing me so, sunshine..great last line..huggs
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Date: 4/25/2016 2:39:00 AM
No one is safe here "soup", dear Nette - The Copyright © is a false safety - "The fly" is still in the "soup" - hugs //Sun :)
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Date: 4/24/2016 5:07:00 PM
anne..hope you are well and safe!..happy day and love to ya!
Date: 4/24/2016 9:27:00 AM
What did happen to the image of a slimy frog then? Did anyone attempt to kiss the frog? ;) Nice one. Keep it coming, Sun. Hugs!
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:57:00 AM
- ...... those who believe in fairy tales, will kiss the frog without considering it ....... beware.... it could be toxic !?! - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments,Moon Flower :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/24/2016 7:36:00 AM
Enjoyed your write this afternoon Anne-Lise :) hope your weekend has been an awesome one! xxx
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Date: 4/24/2016 11:59:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Wilma :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/24/2016 2:16:00 AM
What a beautiful work my dear... I have missed your poems ... 7/7. For this brilliant write:).. Hugs Red
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:42:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Red :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/23/2016 6:53:00 PM
Ya gotta do what ya gotta do. Pucker up the next one just might be that elusive Prince!
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:41:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Richard :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/23/2016 5:10:00 PM
A beautifully written piece.
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:36:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Lenny :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/23/2016 4:50:00 PM
The words of the text wave between direct letter and symbolic inspiration . This technique make the poem touch the deep points in soul .
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:39:00 AM
- Thank you for interpreters and comments my poems, Anwer :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/23/2016 3:04:00 PM
Wonderful write Sunshine
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:36:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments, Joseph :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/23/2016 3:02:00 PM
Extremely beautiful. A truth of life. Loved always my lovely lovely friend. +7+. Loved always, bl
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Date: 4/24/2016 6:35:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit a 7 and lovely comments, dear Bl :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/23/2016 7:36:00 AM
Profound dear Sunshine Smile! A lovely message wrapped in fine verse!
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:50:00 AM
- Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments :) - Happy weekend, my friend Demetrios :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/22/2016 6:19:00 PM
Dear Anne-Lise, A ravishing and quite compelling write. One never knows what might happen when one kisses " . . . a slimy frog." Maybe the result will both marvelous and magical. We can only hope so. Great Work. TR/FAV. Best!! Gary
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Date: 4/23/2016 8:44:00 AM
- I do not believe in magic ....... not until I get it proven - But hope and dreams are there always, dear friend Gary - Appreciated a TR/FAV., thanks :) - hugs // Sun :)
Date: 4/22/2016 3:01:00 PM
I will give that frog a kiss :)....such a happy poem A-L....have a great weekend
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Date: 4/22/2016 4:21:00 PM
- Do you dare, kiss the frog Tim :)? - I'm too old to believe in fairy tales :) - Thanks for nice visit and lovely comments - Happy weekend my friend :) - hugs // Sun :)
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