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Marietes

Dear little insect
                         «Our Lady's Bird» bring good luck
                                               ~
                                     Aphids for supper
                               a red robe with seven dots
                               Virgin Mary sent from God









08.07.2018
Sun :) A-L Andresen :)
Tanka: 5-7-5-7-7 syllable

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018



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Date: 11/7/2018 6:51:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise, the ladybird has life within your most wonderful words. The ladybird, small, yet beautiful can touch the heart when seen. The wonders of nature do sing in your heart. Love the content Anne-Lise. have a wonderful Thursday. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 11/8/2018 1:00:00 PM
- Thank you so much Mike, your comment warms and motivates for further work :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2018 11:50:00 AM
Your poem is incredibly sweet, Sunshine.. Ladybugs are so graceful! Enjoyed this very much! Many blessings to you..
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Date: 7/23/2018 12:54:00 AM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Robertina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/22/2018 2:37:00 AM
Diversity. Here in South Africa the lady birds are yellow with black spots...
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Date: 7/23/2018 12:54:00 AM
- Many thanks, Kai :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2018 2:44:00 PM
I missed this lovely poem...Very sweet Lady B ...All the best Anne-Lise
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Date: 7/15/2018 2:46:00 PM
- I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/15/2018 12:55:00 AM
So soft and sweet! I will have to check my own garden now!!! :)
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Date: 7/15/2018 8:49:00 AM
- Thank you so much Arthur, for your very kind comment and visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/14/2018 12:44:00 PM
I love this Anne-Lise. Ladybugs are a favorite in my garden. If I see one I actually catch it and take it home to my own garden and turn it loose. I have a special garden to attract butterflies which are my very favorites. This is a great one. God Bless, JB
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Date: 7/14/2018 1:28:00 PM
- Ladybugs are useful insects to have in your garden ... I love butterflies, there have been many this summer :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/11/2018 9:19:00 AM
Oh I love ladybugs and you've painted this poem to reflect the simplest things in life while, depicting a little insect as a wondrous being from God. Very well done; favoriting.
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Date: 7/11/2018 11:50:00 AM
- Many thanks, M.L. :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2018 4:18:00 PM
Clever tanka... Ants collect aphids and place them on my dahlia flowers... Oh the wonders of nature...
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Date: 7/10/2018 8:31:00 AM
- Many thanks, S.O. :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2018 11:21:00 AM
just incredibly charming, anne... you're a lady bug!...happy huggs
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:33:00 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2018 9:26:00 AM
Just lovely, Anne-Lise xxoo
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:33:00 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/9/2018 8:13:00 AM
This is quite pretty. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:32:00 PM
- Richard, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 9:54:00 PM
Sunshine.. Tonight, the mountain sky is clear. In a few hours the stars will tease me with their winks. The twilight is for your poem, and it's as enjoyable as the coming sunset!
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:32:00 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, L.M. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 8:31:00 PM
this is beautiful, Sunshine... Hugs eve
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:31:00 PM
- Many thanks, Eve :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 6:28:00 PM
I love Lady Birds, evokes such joy in kids, I still remember the fascination of observing them. Your Tanka is amazing Anne-Lise, so is the image....Maria hugs
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:31:00 PM
- Many thanks, Maria :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 5:00:00 PM
so sweet, dear!!
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:30:00 PM
- Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 4:40:00 PM
LOve the Tanka, and the subject matter is amazing..
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:30:00 PM
- Many thanks, Harry :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 3:40:00 PM
Simply beautiful, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:12:00 PM
- Vijay, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 2:03:00 PM
A delightful Tanka, as delightful as the "Lady" it describes dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Date: 7/8/2018 3:17:00 PM
- Many thanks, Demetrios :) - I greatly appreciate your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 7/8/2018 1:51:00 PM
Beautiful tanka, I've only seen one in the garden this year Anne-Lise, as a child I used to see hundreds in the hedgerows:-( hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/9/2018 1:12:00 PM
- Jan, thank you so much for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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