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flip flopsMillipede

If I were a millipede
         - / Flip-Flops

         The only thing I wanted was slippers
         - / Flip-Flops

         Five hundred pairs - you might think it's a lot
         - / Flip-Flops

         The best "doctor" for my tiny little feet 
         - / Flip-Flops

         Let it be my greatest happiness
         - / Flip-Flops

         On the beach with lovely bathing water
         - / Flip-Flops

         Sun through my purple sunshine hat
         - / Flip-Flops

         I prefer the sweet taste of ice cream
         - / Flip-Flops

         Satisfaction prevents envy, soul or not -
         It would be a floating summer symphony
         filled with grains of sand, salt, sun
         and a lot of Flip-Flops






24.08.2020
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Soul Slipper Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Kai Michael Neumann
4th place in the contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/8/2020 8:11:00 PM
Wow! Congrats. Thanks for sharing this. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.
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Date: 9/9/2020 7:03:00 AM
- I really appreciate your visit and congratulations, thank you very much, Beata :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2020 5:44:00 PM
Such a clever approach, Anne-Lise. You captured the essence of summer relaxing through the eyes of a most unexpected protagonist. Next time I see a millipede, I'm going to picture 1000 tiny flip-flops! Congrats on your win! Hugs ~ John
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Date: 9/9/2020 7:02:00 AM
... :) ... lots of cute little shoes, John :) - I really appreciate your visit and congratulations, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2020 9:34:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. So Cute. Love your poem, picture, Flip-Flops and ice cream. Please, no millipedes for me. Have a great day..................
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Date: 9/9/2020 7:00:00 AM
- Fun and cute millipede :) - I really appreciate your visit and congratulations, thank you very much, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/8/2020 3:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your Great Win, Anne-Lise!
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Date: 9/9/2020 6:59:00 AM
- I really appreciate your visit and congratulations, thank you very much, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/4/2020 11:18:00 AM
You managed to put a smile back on my face with this one, Anne-Lise...after all...writing should not always have to be serious. Enjoyed! Warmest wishes! :) john
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Date: 9/4/2020 11:29:00 AM
- A poem written for smiles and laughter, John - The world is serious enough as it is :) - Many thanks for your valuable comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/30/2020 8:38:00 AM
One day I had to lick the ice cream from my flip flops. I learnt to speed up from then on ...
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Date: 8/30/2020 12:00:00 PM
:))) ... not easy to run in flip- flops :) - Many thanks for visiting and your fun comments, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/26/2020 9:36:00 AM
This is a really clever idea for this contest and you made me smile...
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:41:00 AM
- A smile is worth more than words, S.O. ... many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2020 6:21:00 AM
Lovely creation dear Anne mam.. outstanding imagery.. Enjoyed it though I am scared of millipedes,lol. Best wishes for you in the contest. Take care.Much love to you:-)
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Date: 8/25/2020 10:39:00 AM
- Scared of small millipedes ... no ... :))) - Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Deepa :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2020 5:51:00 AM
Indeed, a unique approach, Anne-lise, all the best:)
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Date: 8/25/2020 10:38:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2020 4:53:00 AM
Very creative and original write, Anne-Lise. All the best.
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/25/2020 1:26:00 AM
so uniquely yours dear Anne Lise. Goodluck for the win!!
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2020 6:28:00 PM
This poem is so cute, I could just pinch its cheeks, Anne-Lise! Delightful! :) gw
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:26:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2020 5:44:00 PM
Oh the imagery is brilliant, love it...
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2020 1:55:00 PM
From the first fantastic image ~ marvelous!
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2020 1:42:00 PM
The lovely arrangement of words/lines and the chorus enable us to visualize and hear a millipede's slow crawl in slippers. A sure winner, Sunshine Smile!!
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2020 12:11:00 PM
ha! the thought of a millipede needing 500 pairs of flip flops cracked me up, anne-lise! nicely done...
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:24:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Ilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 8/24/2020 11:14:00 AM
It makes me want to be in a pair of flip flops and on the beach! :)
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Date: 8/25/2020 5:24:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and your lovely comments, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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