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- Every Breath You Take -

To get my heart in the right rhythm, I have to catch your inner you
Holding hands kiss colors inside sunshine warm paradise 

Together we share our dreams with a glass of pink champagne
Celebrating a living memory of eternal beauty sparkling gems glisten

We will find ourselves in an everlasting magical journey
Where the golden barley shakes silken softly whispers in our breeze

I'll walk with you through ages of time
Uniting as one shadow embraced dancing silver treasure

Pure angel of dawn, you've stolen my heart
Weightless without body floating beautiful falling inside the soul's desire 






Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)  18.04.2015 
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Richard Gumede Date: 5/11/2015 8:18:00 AM Good one. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/11/2015 8:38:00 AM - Thanks for visit and comments, Richard - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Miguel Torres Date: 5/2/2015 7:23:00 PM Not bad, Mizz Anne Lise! Congrats to you on this POW. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2015 12:56:00 PM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Miquel - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kathy Ostapchuk Date: 5/2/2015 5:12:00 PM lovely poem Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/3/2015 12:56:00 PM - Kathy, thanks for nice visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Trenton Moore Date: 5/1/2015 9:37:00 AM I enjoyed it. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/2/2015 12:40:00 PM - Trenton, thanks for visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilyn Williams Date: 4/30/2015 8:32:00 PM I love the write, it gives breathe to every word. Congratulations Anne Lise Andresen. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 5/1/2015 4:09:00 AM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Marilyn - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola Date: 4/28/2015 9:35:00 PM Your poem feels as light as angels hair. Divine. Congratulations Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2015 3:08:00 AM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Jill - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carrie Richards Date: 4/28/2015 7:49:00 PM This lovely poem lifts one's spirits with the whisper of romance !! Congratulations on your poem of the week, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/29/2015 3:08:00 AM - Thanks for congratulations - Nice of you, Carrie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 4/27/2015 4:11:00 AM Congrats Anne,I am so happy to see this as the Poem of the week ,no doubt an excellent work...huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/27/2015 8:21:00 AM - Nice to see you, Kayod5 :) - Thank you for greeting :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mary Diliberto Date: 4/26/2015 7:29:00 PM i enjoyed every word, beautiful Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/27/2015 12:42:00 AM - Thank you, Mary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman Date: 4/26/2015 1:01:00 PM Anne-Lise, Congratulations to you and to Liam on this fine poem and for having it chosen for "Poem of the Week." Extraordinarily well-done!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/26/2015 1:58:00 PM - The pleasure is great, especially when I can share it 50/50 with a good friend .... my co- partner Liam :) - Thank you, Gary! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid Date: 4/26/2015 11:50:00 AM passing you a smile anne lise to congratulate you dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful day and thank you all for the wonderful comments heartfelt Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/26/2015 12:07:00 PM - A happy surprise my friend Liam - I am more than 50% happy :))) - I am 110% happy !!!! - CONGRATULATIONS TO US !!!! - warm hugs // Anne-Lise :)))

Tim Smith Date: 4/26/2015 11:35:00 AM Congratulations you two on the Poem of the Week : ) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/26/2015 12:03:00 PM - A happy surprise .... - Thank you, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak Date: 4/24/2015 4:04:00 PM Any collaboration between you and Liam is magical, and this is no exception. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/24/2015 4:32:00 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Monterey :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jack Ellison Date: 4/23/2015 8:18:00 AM You guys deserve a big applause for this romantic write... MAGICAL! Hugs, Jack xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2015 8:41:00 AM - Liam is easy to work with and a wonderful friend :))) Jack Ellison Date: 4/23/2015 8:32:00 AM Terrified... I definitely would be too! Really can't imagine how you collaborate! Guess it's a lot of back and forth conversation and editing! Must have to be very open to a different approach!!! xxx Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/23/2015 8:25:00 AM - Liam and me have made many write together ..... and I really love them all together - But, I must admit that the first time he asked me .... I was terrified :) - Thank you for visiting and comments, Jack :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jill Spagnola Date: 4/22/2015 3:08:00 AM sooo beautiful Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/22/2015 3:43:00 AM - Thank you for visiting and comments, Jill :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock Date: 4/21/2015 6:38:00 PM A very romantic write by both of you. love phyl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/22/2015 3:05:00 AM - Thank you, Phyllis :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Shane Cooper Date: 4/19/2015 6:16:00 PM My friend the images you and Liam have woven are beautiful. You two write so well together, seemless, exquisite phrases. I truely love the magic.Bravo! love Shane xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/20/2015 1:55:00 AM - A pleasure to share, thanks for the lovely comments and visits Shane :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 4/19/2015 2:57:00 PM Beautiful cowrite Anne...hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 4:30:00 PM - Thank you, Joseph :) - Glad you enjoy it - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 4/19/2015 12:46:00 PM Another romantic collaborative work..Enjoyed reading today..Thanks for the visit to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 12:49:00 PM - Glad you enjoy it, Sara :) - Thank you for visiting and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley Date: 4/19/2015 9:34:00 AM A great collab my friends.. Very romantic poetry and you guys are a perfect match for writing together IMHO. A7 and bravooooooo!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 11:49:00 AM - Glad you enjoy it, Robert :) - Thank you for visiting, a 7, bravoooooo and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez Date: 4/19/2015 1:45:00 AM Another romantic duet from your pens my friends! Lovely.... :) Kim Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 11:47:00 AM - Thanking you for visit and comments, Kim - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter Date: 4/18/2015 9:35:00 PM Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Another very beautiful and wonderful love poem penned by you my dearest friends.Just dazzling!Very beautifully penned.A very romantic beautiful sweet and passionate love poem to be held so very close to my heart.smiling.I enjoy it!A real gem!Just awesome!A 7+++ to each!A fav!Your pens are truly mighty golden!Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you always!:)Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 11:46:00 AM - Thanking you for visit, a 7 + fav. and comments, Dorian - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 4/18/2015 4:23:00 PM brightly done from liam and you, anne... so wndearing!.. huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 11:46:00 AM - Thanking you for visit and comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 4/18/2015 2:56:00 PM When two hearts beat as one, nothing can tear them apart, and that is when dreams become reality... I enjoyed this very enchanting write from you and Liam! Well done to you both! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 11:45:00 AM - Thanking you for visits and comments, Kelly :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath Date: 4/18/2015 2:49:00 PM Sorry, perhaps forgot to click 7. Loved always,bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 4/19/2015 11:44:00 AM - Thanking you for a 7 :)

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