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An earthquake with enormous dimensions Pain that destroy your joy and your smile An internal earthquake that no one can see Thoughts that destroy and that you are alone with Pain that provides tears on your cheek An internal earthquakes a cry that no one hears The pleasure of life die in pain and heavy thoughts An internal earthquake that no one can see A rose that withers and eventually dies 16.02.2013 A-L Andresen :)

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/23/2013 1:33:00 PM

such a deep piece, especially the way yp speak of inner turmoil... sensational anne.. have a good sunday!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/7/2013 4:53:00 PM

- Thanks for your visit and your comments Nette, much appreciated feedback on my poems. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Morrison

Date: 5/13/2013 4:12:00 PM

Yes, internal disasters are often worse or just as bad... Good write! Kim

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/14/2013 2:13:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Kim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Hicks

Date: 4/21/2013 7:52:00 AM

It seems that those internal disasters can be worse, for most don't know it's even happening... whereas tornadoes and such are obvious. Good work!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 4/21/2013 7:55:00 AM

- Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Timothy. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolen Song

Date: 3/1/2013 11:59:00 PM

Nice expressions penned in this poem. What a powerful term to describe inner turmoil. Missed reading your poetry while I was away....Hope all is well, Anne Lise.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/2/2013 1:00:00 PM

I send you much sunshine from Turkey, when the sun shines everything is fine, Gwen! - Thanks for your visit and comments - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Gwendolen Song
Date: 3/2/2013 12:00:00 AM

ps...i liked the contrasting ending of the fragile flower...

Carol Eastman

Date: 2/25/2013 2:19:00 PM

Very sad and touching. Beautifully written.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/25/2013 2:21:00 PM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you Carol. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath

Date: 2/23/2013 11:47:00 AM

Internal unseen damage is nicely worded caused by internal earthquake done by other from different dimensions in life. Your last line is absolutely true. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/23/2013 11:56:00 AM

Thank you for taking the time to read my poem, nice with a comment from you bl. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 2/22/2013 11:38:00 AM

Anne Lise this has a very curious deep message here, hope it is not from life...David

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2013 11:42:00 AM

Life goes up and down, David :) Thanks for your comments and your visit. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Dan Kearley

Date: 2/21/2013 3:39:00 PM

Oh I have felt this kind of earthquake...But we must still carry on.Nice write! And have a pleasant and happy day. :o) f.e.f. oxoxo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/22/2013 2:13:00 AM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Dan. - oxox / / f.e.f. Anne-Lise :)

Len Gasun

Date: 2/20/2013 6:34:00 AM

A very beautifully sad poem my very dear friend! After an earthquake, there must always be hope for a new beginning. I've enjoyed reading again another outstanding and awesome write of yours tonight my dear Anne-Lise. Thank you so much for everything! love and big hugs, Leonora

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/20/2013 6:37:00 AM

Love & big hug refunded to you my dear friend Leonora. - Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you. <3 <3 <3 - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debra Squyres

Date: 2/19/2013 3:33:00 PM

Let's hope and pray the rose only withers, awaiting a tender tending hand to gentle the earthquakes in our hearts and mind.... a survivor dreams this so for all to see...so it's said..pray that it be. Moved once again deeply by your words on this page... Good write, my friend, good write.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 3:37:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Debra. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/19/2013 1:46:00 PM

Earthquakes sometimes are necessary to test our endurance and to regenerate our psychological makeup! Very good conception wrapped in a foil of wisdom!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 1:53:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Demetrios. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Debbie Duncan

Date: 2/19/2013 12:27:00 PM

This is so sad Anne Lise,,,, it's good write, but sad. You are too nice to be sad,,,, thank you for reading I call her name. my X had dreams of his grave, was with him for 17yrs.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 12:34:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Debbie. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 2/19/2013 11:50:00 AM

Very weighty stuff! Internal earthquakes are indeed difficult to bear. Nice work. J

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 12:33:00 PM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 2/19/2013 10:53:00 AM

Beautifully sad, creatively written from one of my favorite poet here on PS :) Thanks for sharing my dear friend Anne Lise..been away for few days because I'm very busy with my final examination...thanks for your unending support and belated happy Valentine's day. hugs and kisses from me.. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 11:02:00 AM

- Hope your examination went well !!!!! :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 11:00:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Fisayo Aderounmu

Date: 2/19/2013 7:28:00 AM

well captured... it's once experienced. Luv your good concept.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 7:31:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Fisayo. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 2/18/2013 11:22:00 PM

Excellent write! I too must say this is the best poem I have read today and this whole week. I am impressed! Keep up the splendid work and thank you for your kind attention on my work~I appreciate it immensely. always, Laura

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/19/2013 2:30:00 AM

Thank you for visiting my poem, I appreciate your visit and your comments Laura. - Welcome back - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Jack Jordan

Date: 2/17/2013 7:21:00 PM

Very nice. I really like the concept of an internal earthquake. J

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2013 12:40:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Jack. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 2/17/2013 6:00:00 PM

I have had some moments and a moment of something is better then a life time of nothing, so believe me “ Life is short, ” and I do my best to “ make something out of it ” . OXOXOXOXXXXX ( B. J. “A” 2 ) Bill .V4D8

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2013 12:39:00 AM

OXOXOXOXOXOX....................

William J. Jr. Atfield

Date: 2/17/2013 5:59:00 PM

Thank you my Dear, for thinking so “ A very good poem! ” and for the “ Have a nice Sunday afternoon. – oxox ” especially for the “ – oxox ” Anne Lise, which old guys like my could use a lot of, even if it comes from a stranger, out of cyber space, on the internet super highway. How true “ Happiness is having someone to share life with. ”, unfortunately, Anne Lise, a lot of us do not have that in our lives, and as you have read in my stuff, As I read, so have I known !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2013 12:38:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, William. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Duke Beaufort

Date: 2/17/2013 4:23:00 PM

How marvelous! I am so fond of this poem! Over time, the thoughts not allowed to be expressed do build up emotional energy. Then, they come out one way or another or they affect what's going on within--once the stress it so great. What a beautiful way of expressing some of this! The psychologists and psychiatrists don't say it as well as you do! Good reason to vent, I'd say!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2013 12:37:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Duke. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/17/2013 4:08:00 PM

It would be a mighty upheaval of emotion to have such feeling like an earthquake inside you. WEll described, sweetie.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/18/2013 12:36:00 AM

Thanks for your visit and your comments - always nice to see you, Andrea. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Mohammad Yamin

Date: 2/17/2013 1:30:00 PM

Wow! An enormously beautiful poem. All feel these inner earthquakes. Thanks for stopping by and your supportive comments on my poem Suicide Bomber. You are so right suicide bombers are brainwashed. In reality they are tools of those brain washing them. The real criminals work from behind the scene. Have a nice day Anne. Love. -Mohammad

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/17/2013 2:11:00 PM

Thanks for your comments and your visit, Mohammad. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)