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Own emotional wounds Waiting for a seed to germinate Evergreen, my little bean The child who was never born A handful of soft down Glass bowl with pink walls with an opening to the universe Death, no sign of life A quiet heart in this star-crossed trip Blocked by rivers of tears The painful experience Unprocessed trauma When things are difficult frustration, sadness, anger and longing You become completely paralyzed A piece of my heart will always be in heaven The inner dialogue ... if you only knew ~~~ 25.10.2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved If only you knew Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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John Watt

Date: 11/27/2020 12:18:00 AM

Terribly sad, but handled so poetically and poignantly, Anne-Lise. The sadness never fully leaves. Thank you for sharing with us, going in my faves. Hugs ~ John

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 11/27/2020 1:59:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your visit, lovely comment and the fave, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Beata Agustin

Date: 10/28/2020 1:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... It's my prayer that you'll find solace in the belief that by God's grace, you'll soon meet your dear child in heaven. Thanks likewise for your uplifting comments. God bless you.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/28/2020 2:22:00 AM

- Beata, thank you very much for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus

Date: 10/27/2020 1:00:00 PM

Beautiful...and yet this is so sad, Anne-Lise. The loss of a child, even if unborn, leaves a lot of sorrow in its wake. Hugs // paul

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 1:02:00 PM

- A wound that never heals, Paul - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 10/26/2020 8:36:00 PM

Beautiful! Relying upon His grace ~ We yet take solace ~ Spirit eternal ~ Love vibrational. Congrats on your win!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:30:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, U.S. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mark Koplin

Date: 10/26/2020 5:18:00 PM

Congrats Anne on your win! Great job!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:29:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Mark :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 10/26/2020 12:43:00 PM

Sometimes only silence can hold the cradle of grief, God only knows where broken dreams go to be drowned, nicely done dear Sunshine.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:34:00 AM

- Grief has so many paths, Pixie - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Peter Dome

Date: 10/26/2020 11:31:00 AM

Very well done. heartbreaking read. Hope you won. x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:32:00 AM

- Peter, thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/26/2020 11:23:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise, Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:28:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 10/26/2020 10:34:00 AM

Hi Sunshine Smile, this brings back the emails we wrote to one another - the saddest thing in the world, the most heart breaking, is to lose a child. Congrats my dear friend on your win with this sad but wonderful poem Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:32:00 AM

- No one can understand ... without having experienced a self ... a child who will always be missed, dear friend :) - Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/26/2020 10:14:00 AM

Back with a big congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:27:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/26/2020 10:13:00 AM

I am back to congratulate you, Anne-Lise, on your great placement in the contest!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:27:00 AM

- Thank you very much for visiting and congratulations, Newton :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 10/26/2020 9:15:00 AM

Deeply touching poem my friend and I can feel the angst and sadness in it... Congratulations on your placement..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/27/2020 9:26:00 AM

- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Newton Ranaweera

Date: 10/26/2020 5:48:00 AM

Sure, a well-structured tragic scene. For some reason, I remember Hamlet's speech, "To be, or not to be"!! A sure winner, Anne-Lise!!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 8:02:00 AM

- Thank you very much Newton, for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/25/2020 9:30:00 PM

Sunshine, a heartbreaking poem. Well don. Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 8:01:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your comments, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/25/2020 8:06:00 PM

So sad, the poetry brings everything into perspective. Love this, Anne-Lise, Stay Safe my Norwegian friend.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 8:00:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer

Date: 10/25/2020 4:20:00 PM

so sad, anne-lise, but so beautifully expressed...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 7:57:00 AM

- Terribly sad, Ilene - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 10/25/2020 3:13:00 PM

Sadness stirs within you. My daughter had an ectopic pregnancy...I think about that one too. Hugs. Nicely done.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 7:56:00 AM

- So sad, Kim ... the child who was loved was never born :( - hugs // Anne-Lise

Panagiota Romios

Date: 10/25/2020 2:57:00 PM

Some lose what they want, minions of baby killed daily.wonder what they think as death is chosen over life.? Powerful poem Pangie..., More murders of babies than natural losses. God created them we murder them..some humanity we have!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 7:54:00 AM

- Cruel world, Panagiota ... can not bear to think the thought ... : ( - hugs // Anne-Lise

Vijay Pandit

Date: 10/25/2020 2:08:00 PM

Powerful write, Anne-Lise..the inner dialogue...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 7:51:00 AM

- Thank you very much for your support and your comments, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 10/25/2020 1:33:00 PM

Its agonising for Women who lose a child or cant have any, must be heartbreaking to see other Moms with children. Good luck Anne. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/26/2020 7:50:00 AM

- There will always be one child missing, thank you very much for your lovely comments, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 10/25/2020 1:20:00 PM

Loss of love is sad. But what is, must be. Best to move on. ~~

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/25/2020 1:27:00 PM

- Loss of an unborn child, Victor ... I hope it comes out clearly in the text - hugs // Anne-Lise