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- Delicate Balance, Divine and Fragile -

Always inside living thoughts Once held a vision adoring thee Beholding beams though these eyes Star spangled one look totally breathless This heart's calling your name precious Together uniting strengths join within power Making hopes and dreams come alive Saying onto myself breathtakingly gorgeous Adding this truly wonderful music Into the soul princess cut deeply singing tunes develop In every echo out of this world I wish to retake the perfect soft breath held Melting golden feelings burning gasps warmly sigh Why do I love you so Wearing the glass slippers Fragile as a newborn butterfly taking flight In all the flowers freshly plucked Standing out most beautiful A diamond rose stunning dewdrops sparkle Touching, kissing, loving you forever more Holding someone special always showing them how deeply appreciated they are Fireworks display our passion to share in a world filled promise Conveying the love inside each tiny seed picking you one precious gem Your words are sparkling wine your presence divine Your beauty makes me comfortable dizzy Intoxicating drunken in anything you wish becomes the soul command In the distance ~ the dying sun forever sleeps with you one dream obeys A Collaborated Poem 07.11.2015 Anne-Lise Andresen, and Liam Mc Daid

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Date: 12/12/2015 8:54:00 AM
oh so many sparkles in your poem....Lol May the faeries keep you safe with their fairy dust
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Date: 12/7/2015 2:58:00 PM
Beautiful poem. Continue.
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:56:00 PM
Beautiful... SKAT
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Date: 12/6/2015 8:07:00 AM
- THANKS !!!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/2/2015 8:46:00 AM
Outstanding Collaboration here Anne-Lise and Liam!! The words and the imagery most certainly live up to the title of this wonderfully-conceived and radiant write. (Time to wash it all down now with a Stout Glass of the Old Irish My Dear Friends!!) Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 12/1/2015 8:28:00 AM
Stunning poem collaboration between two very talented poems. ~~X~~
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Date: 11/30/2015 4:45:00 PM
Hi Liam n' Anne Lise!Wow!Wow!This is a most very beautiful, romantic passionate, dreamy and captivating heartfelt love poem you've written here my dearest friends.Just dazzling!So very beautifully written! I truly enjoy it.A true golden gem!Just awesome!Another most very beautiful dreamy sweet romantic passionate heartfelt love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.So very beautiful and sweet.Very enchanting!Just wonderful!I just love it!Excellent imagery!Just superb!Outstanding collaboration!Your pens are truly mighty golden!A 7 + ++ to each! A Fav!Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers Liam.Keep your Faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too.Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light! God bless you always!:)Love n hugs!xoxox D.^O^
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