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- Deep Forest -

                           You need to go far, farther, even farther
                                  Over small streams and tracks
                 The moon is distant, but can be glimpsed through the trees
                           A moose lifts his head, a beautiful antlers
                                          King of the forest
                                 Can smell the forest and wildlife
                                   The fox howling at the moon
                                           Echoes in the woods
                                         Two yellow glowing eyes
                              It is the owl which are on the night watch
                                  Hope that all mice are safely home
                               The moon disappears behind the clouds
                                   Darkness falls, deep into the forest




28.05.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

(5th in the contest)

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Robert Nehls Date: 7/10/2014 4:51:00 AM Ah, life in the forest, Anne-Lise. such a great place to see life as darkness falls. In many ways it reminds me of scenes in unfamiliar cities I have been. Always much to observe and learn. Very nice picture, my friend.... Robert. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/10/2014 4:54:00 AM - Yes, the forest can be exciting .... - Thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis Date: 3/15/2014 11:14:00 AM Anne Lise Such a creative and imaginative write. A wonderful tale of a forests life and all the activity it sees. Thanks for the great comment on my Two Little Poems write. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/15/2014 11:35:00 AM - Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh Date: 10/17/2013 10:47:00 PM What a wonderful glimpse into the forest. Great poem Anne Lise! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/18/2013 1:54:00 AM - Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shanity Rain Date: 10/5/2013 11:16:00 AM This is truly a wonderful write , win ! see. There is something about you .Your Friend , Yvette. well new pen name Shanity rain. Congratulations ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/5/2013 11:48:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation,sweet Shanity ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway Date: 10/5/2013 7:17:00 AM Congratulations on your win friend Anne :) Have a blessed weekend to you and to your family. cheers!! :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/5/2013 7:34:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation,Maria ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Skat A Date: 10/1/2013 8:43:00 PM nice win............. LUV.............. SKAT Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2013 12:24:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Skat ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Donna Jones Date: 10/1/2013 7:11:00 PM Congratulations Anne Lise...love the owl on night watch!!!!! Nice poem...... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2013 12:23:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Donna ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 10/1/2013 5:00:00 PM I believe that I read this poem about a month ago. And, I love it just as much now, as I did then! Wonderful work, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2013 5:58:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Kelly ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 10/1/2013 3:01:00 PM this one was really really nice. Congrats on the winners list. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2013 3:04:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Andrea ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick Date: 9/30/2013 8:36:00 PM A lovely piece. Well done! congrats to you. BG Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2013 2:37:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Barbara ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 9/30/2013 7:43:00 PM love the walk through the woods, you set the scene perfectly, and as I am reading this, an owl is singing from the trees outback...congrats on your win :) great poem Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2013 2:36:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Sandra ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Painted Hunter Date: 9/30/2013 3:48:00 PM Anne, I enjoyed the basic nature and beauty of your poem. It was a great entry...thank you! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2013 2:35:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Caleb ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 9/30/2013 3:25:00 PM congrats on your win Anne Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/1/2013 2:34:00 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Joseph ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/30/2013 12:32:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :) Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 9/30/2013 12:25:00 PM a lovely win...Anne..Linda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/30/2013 12:33:00 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation

Diana Freiwald Date: 9/17/2013 2:13:00 PM Enjoyed the simplicity of this poem, is very soothing and good. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/18/2013 8:51:00 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Diana! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Joyce Date: 8/13/2013 11:25:00 AM i loved yur imagery :)))..we all need more deep woods to go to :)) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/13/2013 11:47:00 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Jim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler Date: 8/10/2013 3:54:00 PM Great imagery in this poem, Anne Lise! I felt like I was standing in a darkened woods as I was reading this. You write very well! Thank you for the nice comments, once again. It really means a lot! You have a nice weekend, too! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/11/2013 2:50:00 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Kelly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper Date: 7/12/2013 1:46:00 PM Oh my, kind of spooky LOL! I hope all the little mice are safely home. Great job! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/12/2013 1:48:00 PM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Marquis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff Date: 6/16/2013 8:04:00 AM Anne Lise...the only place i really feel connected....wish i could go more...jimbo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/16/2013 8:05:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you James!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton Date: 6/13/2013 12:07:00 PM charming simply charming I love it Anne Lise this is excellent Shadow x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/13/2013 12:08:00 PM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Shadow!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop Date: 6/10/2013 2:33:00 PM Gee defonty gives the feeling of a deep dark forest.Somehow you took me back to childhood memories when mum used to read Hansel and Grethel for me and those kids got lost in a deep forest.Excellent sweetie Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/11/2013 1:30:00 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Charma!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway Date: 6/8/2013 6:47:00 AM wow!! its like I'm watching a short film.. "The Deep Forest" very creative write my friend Anne..have a wonder day. cheers!! :) Maria Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/8/2013 7:03:00 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 6/5/2013 9:45:00 AM great write Anne....thanks for stopping by...best wishes Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/5/2013 10:44:00 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sayeed Abubakar Date: 6/5/2013 6:57:00 AM No nice an imagery! A true poet you are. I like it very much. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/5/2013 7:03:00 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Sayeed. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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