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- Creative Haiku - Aqua Blue -

underground rivers

                                    imprint in the limestone 

                                        s t o r m -

                                       in water glass






                                               19/03/2021
                                       Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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                                   Creative Haiku Poetry Contest
                               Sponsored by: Constance La France
                                          5 - 6 - 1- 4  syllables
                                        1st place in the contest

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Date: 3/24/2021 3:19:00 PM
Anne-Lise, congratulations on your win in my challenge Let's Get Creative with Haiku and you did exactly that, I love this excellent non traditional Haiku, well done_Constance
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2021 3:59:00 AM
- Many thanks for my place on your winning list, Constance ... haiku is one of my favorites ... but, I prefer 5-7-5 syllables :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2021 12:10:00 PM
Congratulations Sunshine Smile on your first place podium win. Brilliant work. Thanks for congratulating me too. Howard
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2021 4:00:00 AM
- Howard, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/24/2021 8:23:00 AM
Refreshing words! Congratulations!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/25/2021 3:59:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Juliet :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 4:36:00 PM
Another beautiful haiku from you sweet Anne-Lise, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 10:55:00 AM
- Jan, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 4:30:00 PM
This is wonderful, Anne-lise! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 10:55:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 2:14:00 PM
Way to go with your winning Ku, Sunshine. Congratulations
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 10:55:00 AM
- Thank you very much Andrea, for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 1:45:00 PM
What a storm in a glass. Congratulations on your winning poem.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 10:54:00 AM
- Kai, thank you very much for your comments and congratulation :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 12:53:00 PM
I am not sure which is the most gorgeous - the poem or the photo.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 1:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Caren :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/22/2021 11:38:00 AM
Congratulation on your win. Love your write and picture. "Beautiful/Wonderful" Have a blessed day/week.........
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 10:54:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and congratulation, Paula :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2021 12:37:00 PM
Anne-Lise, absolute fantastic haiku with a perfect picture to match. So creative. Good luck in the contest. Sending warm hugs your way~ Warren
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/23/2021 1:47:00 AM
- Thank you very much Warren, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/21/2021 6:20:00 AM
What a striking imagery! Best wishes in the contest!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 7:05:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 3:13:00 PM
Very thought out work for the contest. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Thanks for the visit with congrats to my page. Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/21/2021 7:03:00 AM
- Thank you very much Sara, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 1:33:00 PM
Sunshine smile, Another classic work superbly written. Best wishes. Thank you for your soupmail Howard
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:09:00 PM
- Howard, thank you very much for your comments and good wishes :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/20/2021 5:53:00 AM
lovely ~
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 1:56:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Line :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 5:47:00 PM
Sublime Haiku dearest, Anne-Lise! Hugs xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:08:00 PM
- Demetrios, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 4:02:00 PM
Hello Sunshine Smile , a beautiful photo . Enjoyed the Haiku. Hugs Darlene
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Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 3/21/2021 10:44:00 AM
Hello Sunshine Smile, yes i enjoyed both. Hugs Darlene.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:08:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Darlene :) - Glad you enjoy both :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 3:40:00 PM
Excellent haiku verses, best of luck in the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:06:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments and good wishes, Tayeb :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 2:02:00 PM
Still waters of creativity run deep in your elegant haiku, Anne-Lise, then wash over us in soothing blue. All the best for the contest.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 1:58:00 PM
- Beautiful colors, Sam - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 1:51:00 PM
Heya Anne Lise, recheck Constance’s rules, on the haiku contest, this is beautiful imagery, be a shame if disallowed, cheers David, delete this comment if you wish thereafter
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:05:00 PM
- Only make a few small changes ... - Thank you very much for your comments, David :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 1:23:00 PM
Beautiful haiku!! We have a lot of limestone in Florida and many of our rivers are fed by underground streams that do have the color like the photo. Eucalyptus has a lovely sent! Best wishes in Constance's contest. Hugs, Carolyn
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:04:00 PM
- I was in an underwater cave in Spain many years ago ... it was wet, humid air and dark ... not impressive, Carolyn - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 8:03:00 AM
WoW! Anne-Lise , This is a good entry for the contest. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekend:-) Alexis
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:01:00 PM
- Happy weekend and thank you very much for your comments, Alexis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 6:56:00 AM
Very clever write with a grand finale.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:00:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your comments, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 5:36:00 AM
Beautiful... imaginative, brilliant and vibrant, hues of azure promise... love it. God bless you sweet friend. Love, Gina
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 2:00:00 PM
- Gina, thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 5:18:00 AM
Great images--the ending line makes an impact, Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 1:59:00 PM
- Thank you very much Vijay, for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/19/2021 2:28:00 AM
Love the image Anne, probably thousands of years old. Best of luck in the contest, hope you have a great day. Tom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/20/2021 1:58:00 PM
- Definitely old, Tom - Thank you very much for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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