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- Cracks In the Facade -

chaos elements of normality
insects buzzing in lamp dome
reveals alluring mouths

he breathes out a photographic desire
the contact lenses pops out
caught in pink mesh stockings

black curls colored bluish by the sunlight
like the children's drawn doodles
no shiny surfaces

                           




12/11/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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3rd place in the contest

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Na Na Date: 12/8/2019 7:42:00 PM Congrats on your winning poem Anne-Lise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/9/2019 12:19:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Greg :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 12/8/2019 6:58:00 PM Congratulations for your win Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/9/2019 12:19:00 PM - Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Anisha Dutta Date: 11/25/2019 11:19:00 PM Nicely Penned. All the best. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/26/2019 1:44:00 PM - Thank you very much, Anisha :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 11/14/2019 9:10:00 AM Nice interesting piece Anne-Lise, quite deep in parts though but fine penning! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/16/2019 1:22:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Gordon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sandra Adams Date: 11/13/2019 8:16:00 PM what a brilliant write my friend, that photo works well with your words, made it more powerful.... best wishes in the contest... hugs :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/16/2019 1:21:00 PM - Many thanks for your kind visit and your comment, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Brenda Chiri Date: 11/13/2019 1:36:00 PM Loved this!;) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/13/2019 1:41:00 PM - I'm glad, thank you very much Brenda - So few people comment on this ... I thought it might be "too deep" - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Frederic Parker Date: 11/12/2019 6:15:00 PM Very deep dear poet, after reading I felt like stabbing the throat of anguish with a dull knife... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/13/2019 8:08:00 AM - Sounds awful ... Frederic - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 11/12/2019 12:25:00 PM Sunshine Smile what an intense talented write - I loved every word you penned. Good luck in the contest. Hugs and blessings, Jenny. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2019 12:53:00 PM - Thank you very much, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 11/12/2019 11:29:00 AM Interesting photo, nicely written write to accompany the photo. Good luck in the contest. Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2019 12:53:00 PM - Thank you very much, Eve :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 11/12/2019 8:57:00 AM Love the pic and love the poem, Anne-Lise...poetic (((hugs))) coming your way...^WW^ :o) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2019 12:53:00 PM - Thank you very much, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Richard Lamoureux Date: 11/12/2019 8:43:00 AM Cool poem and photo. Hugs Rick. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2019 12:52:00 PM - Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green Date: 11/12/2019 8:10:00 AM The poem was so cool and that image is so creepy. Nicely done my friend. Best wishes in the contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 11/12/2019 12:52:00 PM - Thank you very much, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)