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02.08.2025

Anne-Lise Andresen
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                                An unhealthy focus in life
                                No comedy - a tragedy
                                A home with alcohol and drugs
                                Withdrawal symptoms - 
                                from heaven to hell

                                Severe and painful neglect
                                No stability in everyday life
                                - seen through the eyes of a 6-aged
                                Who must bear the heavy burden
                                throughout his upbringing

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Date: 8/3/2025 9:45:00 AM
So sad dear Anne-Lise, its happening, its happened but hopefully it will lessen. One hears of this tragedy happening within all classes of society, and the film industry in particular. I can't understand, maybe some people in life are stronger than others and cope with situation whereas others give in and can hit rock bottom if they don't see help. And who suffers , the vulnerable , children mainly, but abused women who don't talk and tell also. An excellent subject you touched on -luv Jen.
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Date: 8/3/2025 6:20:00 AM
Gorgeous sad poem my dear poet friend Anne-lise. So heartbreaking to know the reality that there are many children who suffer a lot and derai due to abandonment or negligence of parents. We'll keep praying for them especially those beyond our reach. Thanks a lot for sharing this precious gem dear. Best wishes and blessings always. Happy wkend/new week ahead. Hugs
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Date: 8/3/2025 6:11:00 AM
This is heartbreaking and deeply moving. You’ve captured the silent weight a child carries in such a raw and honest way. The imagery of ‘from heaven to hell’ is haunting—this piece truly lingers in the heart.
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Date: 8/2/2025 5:25:00 PM
a bit of sadness washed over me as I read your words. What a tough life for a 6-year old. I taught for most of my life and was always concerned for those students who I knew were burdened like this young man. A captivating and engaging read. Have a pleasant evening, hugs, Sara
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Date: 8/2/2025 3:14:00 PM
Not all kids have a good home. Can’t imagine what everyday brings, what each totes.
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Date: 8/2/2025 2:13:00 PM
What a powerful write and picture you have here. So very sad for many kids. "Good Luck" if for a contest. Hugs... Have a blessed day writing away.........
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Date: 8/2/2025 12:42:00 PM
Sad but true in so many cases Sunshine....childhood should be a safe , happy,secure, fun and loved time but for many kids it horrendous, frightening and confusing....incredibly unfair and heart wrenching! Debx
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