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Nobody can change childhood, it's impossible Children should feel safe in their own home, unstoppable Tear down fear, shame, guilt, sorrow, anger and bitterness Much hurts and must be combated, a hunt for happiness Free me from tears and pain of mind and soul When heart breaks and then heals, set the goal ... 17.06.2018 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved When line SIX is a perfect FIX. - Contest Sponsored: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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Arturo Michael

Date: 7/2/2018 2:19:00 PM

A positive write indeed.... One worth fight for...all the best Anne-Lise

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:23:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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Date: 6/29/2018 1:56:00 AM

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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:14:00 PM

- Thank you for the information

Viv Wigley

Date: 6/24/2018 12:56:00 AM

Congrats on a strong write, Anne_Lise, and hugely relevant. Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:13:00 PM

- Many thanks Viv, for congratulations on my contest poems: - Children In Mourning - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 6/23/2018 8:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Sunshine,so very heartfelt and beautiful imagery :) ... Hugs Eve ~`*

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:13:00 PM

- Many thanks Eve, for congratulations on my contest poems: - Children In Mourning - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/23/2018 3:51:00 PM

A beautifully expressed compassionate poem, Anne-Lise, voicing a strong message of love, care and concern for the vulnerable and the voiceless. Congratulations on your wonderful win! Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:12:00 PM

- Many thanks Susan, for congratulations on my contest poems: - Children In Mourning - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/22/2018 8:47:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! A well-written message that hits home with me. So many don't see homeless, neglected, hungry children in our towns, children living in filth with drugged parents. Foster homes needed, juvenile centers, etc. Your poem goes deep. Well done. :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:12:00 PM

- Many thanks Susan, for congratulations on my contest poems: - Children In Mourning - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Moon Flower

Date: 6/22/2018 8:12:00 AM

Simply beautiful. Congratulations, Anne-Lise. :) hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:11:00 PM

- Many thanks Moon Flower, for congratulations on my contest poems: - Children In Mourning - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/21/2018 8:12:00 AM

Coming back to say congratulations,no matter how many times you read, it is still Beautiful, many congrats on your win 2nd position in the contest,have a nice day

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/2/2018 2:11:00 PM

- Many thanks Faraz, for congratulations on my contest poems: - Children In Mourning - Hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charles Messina

Date: 6/21/2018 7:07:00 AM

Coming back to you with Congratulations with your win with this beautiful poem about children feeling safe at home. This one reached me for sure. Yes, this must have been to difficult to judge, so many great writes! hugs // Charlie :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 7:12:00 AM

- I greatly appreciate your feedback, Charlie :) - Many thanks for your visit and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Probir Gupta

Date: 6/20/2018 11:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the contest with this touching poem, Sunshine ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:36:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/20/2018 11:40:00 PM

Back with congratulations Sunshine. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:37:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Tom :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/20/2018 7:58:00 PM

I'm back to say CONGRATS! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:36:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/20/2018 4:37:00 PM

Heartiest congratulations on your much-deserved win, Anne-Lise!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:35:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Edward - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 6/20/2018 4:31:00 PM

Back with congrats Anne-Lise, on your winning poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:34:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and congratulations, Vijay - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 6/20/2018 3:48:00 PM

SAdly children are always the ones who suffer the most... A sad six lines Sunshine.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/21/2018 4:33:00 AM

- Many thanks for my 2nd place in your contest, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 6/20/2018 12:51:00 PM

My heart breaks when I read this. Hurt that a child will have forever. love phyl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:32:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, dear Phyllis :) - I greatly appreciate your feedback :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/20/2018 10:12:00 AM

I truly love this exceptional and important message you have gifted us my friend! This to me is an inspiring and brightly shining gem.. A fav my friend..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:31:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit, comment and your "fav", Robert :) - I greatly appreciate your feedback :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 6/19/2018 3:27:00 AM

This is very thought provoking. And then I am off to find the adult child in me or the child in the reluctant youngster in me. Many wishes, Kai

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:31:00 PM

- Kai, many thanks for your visit and comment :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 6/18/2018 1:27:00 PM

You're so right, Anne-Lise! Your theme is well-conveyed. Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:30:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Janice :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile

Date: 6/18/2018 12:11:00 PM

Perfectly expressed, Anne-Lise and unfortunately relatable by so many. What happens early on does stay with us. xxoo

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:30:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Mike :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 6/18/2018 10:58:00 AM

All children should grow in a safe and loving environment

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Tim :)- hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/18/2018 9:49:00 AM

Superbly said Anne-Lise...you are a voice for the voiceless...a super FAV!...love and light...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:29:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit, comment and your "fav", W.W. :) - I greatly appreciate your feedback :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gary Bateman

Date: 6/18/2018 6:50:00 AM

Hello Dear Anne-Lise, Your rhyme here is full of passion and emotion and is brilliantly articulated. The power of your words literally tug at the heartstrings of the reader. No children should ever have to feel threatened and unwanted. Shame on those who perpetrate such actions!! Best of Luck in the contest!! Outstanding Work and A FAVE!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/20/2018 2:27:00 PM

- Many thanks for your visit, comment and your "fav", Gary - I greatly appreciate your feedback :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Faraz Ajmal

Date: 6/18/2018 6:12:00 AM

This is a really inspiring poem with a deep and beautiful message, everyome deserves to be happy and enjoy life especially when they are in their childhood, once it gone, it will not return and once you are adult, you have so many different problems, so every child deserves to enjoy their childhood, but sadly that s not the case with everyone, if our childhood was awesome, we must thank God, good luck in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2018 6:28:00 AM

- A broken childhood ... can often be a broken adult life, Faraz - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/18/2018 2:43:00 AM

Inspiring and truthful your poem dearest, Anne- Lise! Much liked! Hugsxxx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/18/2018 2:58:00 AM

- Many thousands of children suffer during parenting abuse every day, my friend ... we have to see them - Many thanks for your visit and comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)