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- Bygone Time -

~ it brings tears - every ripple I wrote in my diary ~






14.02.2023
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A Ripple To Me Poetry Contest
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1st place in the contest

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Aysha Nuwas Date: 2/21/2023 11:21:00 PM This brings tears to me too, lovely. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2023 3:10:00 AM - Thank you for your comment, Aysha :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/20/2023 3:34:00 PM Well done, Sunshine. Congrats Login to Reply

Phyllis Babcock Date: 2/20/2023 9:18:00 AM Congrats on your first place finish. Well written. love phyl Login to Reply

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 2/19/2023 6:18:00 AM I still have 2 autograph books in the bottom drawer of my desk and every time I come across it I read a few of the messages, they bring back happy memories of my school years. I can imagine your diary does much the same for you. LOVE AND HUGS, Jennifer. Login to Reply

Christuraj Alex Date: 2/18/2023 9:14:00 PM Beautifully written. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Ann Peck Date: 2/18/2023 3:01:00 PM Oh, I agree with that, Sunshine. Also, every song we sang...A beautiful monoku. Congratulations! Login to Reply

Beata Agustin Date: 2/17/2023 8:01:00 PM Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you. Login to Reply

Michael Tor Date: 2/17/2023 7:50:00 PM Wonderfully written and a first place finish. Well done... Login to Reply

Valsa George Date: 2/17/2023 7:36:00 PM Rousing sad thoughts. Congratulations on your first place win Smile ! Blessings ! Login to Reply

Tania Kitchin Date: 2/17/2023 7:05:00 PM Anne-Lise, love it, congratulations on your first place win! Login to Reply

Evelyn Judy Buehler Date: 2/17/2023 1:28:00 PM Evocative and lovely, Anne-Lise. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2023 3:11:00 AM - Thank you for your comment, Evelyn :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith Date: 2/17/2023 1:07:00 PM Congratulations on your win. A lovely write/book picture. I can feel the tears. Have a great day/weekend............... Login to Reply

Gershon Wolf Date: 2/17/2023 1:05:00 PM Precious!! Way to go on your first place win, Anne-Lise! Login to Reply

Janice Canerdy Date: 2/17/2023 10:13:00 AM Very touching, Anne-Lise. CONGRATS on your win. Janice Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 2/17/2023 9:41:00 AM This I love this, Anne-Lise. All the dreams and disappointments of a young girl or woman penned in her diary brought to light again. You bring such poignancy to this experience of childhood. Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/15/2023 6:22:00 PM Aww…so sweet. I had to get rid of my childhood pages…way to negative. Now, if I ever have to write like that, I immediately destroy. God bless you, sweet one! Login to Reply

Frederic Parker Date: 2/15/2023 4:39:00 PM A visual keepsake from the heart Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/22/2023 3:11:00 AM - Thank you for your comment, Frederic :) - hugs

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/15/2023 4:18:00 PM A very unique type of ripple. WELL done. Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 2/15/2023 1:42:00 PM Ahh!! I can feel the emotion in this one. Way to go. Reads like a good contender for the contest to me. Thanks for sharing and for the visit to my page. Sara Login to Reply

Fin Chuuk Date: 2/15/2023 7:31:00 AM Fabulously done. :) Login to Reply

Victor Buhagiar Date: 2/15/2023 1:56:00 AM This is an excellent Monoku, Anne Lise. Luck with the contest. Login to Reply

Joanna Daniel Date: 2/14/2023 10:23:00 PM Lovely, Anne-lise:) your ripples are touching indeed:) Login to Reply

Panagiota Romios Date: 2/14/2023 3:19:00 PM How touching, Sunshine. I used to write it one, too. Today, Poetry Soup is my diary. There’s some cake for you at my site, Happy Valentine’s Day. Panagiota Login to Reply