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- Brutally - Pleiades B -

Bless all the world's children

Between earth and the stars

Believe that you are loved

Beauty grows in the heart

Blown sweet strawberries kiss

Brushed cotton angel wing

Breathe deeply start to fly














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Each line has only 6 syllables
(poem in the Pleiades form)
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Copyright © Anne-Lise Andresen | Year Posted 2016

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Bl Devnath Date: 8/28/2016 2:10:00 PM It's a beautiful gem of beautiful heartfelt expression my lovely lovely friend. A great 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/28/2016 3:03:00 PM - Bl, thanks for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven Date: 8/19/2016 9:55:00 AM Fabulous poem, awesome message. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2016 12:08:00 PM - Thanks Scott, for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel Date: 8/19/2016 6:19:00 AM Children are truly God's gifts to man:) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/19/2016 6:31:00 AM - Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy Date: 8/18/2016 12:22:00 PM A 7 for this lovely, moving poem! Janice Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2016 12:52:00 PM - Janice, thanks for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/18/2016 11:20:00 AM what a beauty, anne, children are the best gifts of heaven... huggs and happy day! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/18/2016 12:51:00 PM - Thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 8/17/2016 5:37:00 AM Superbly written dear, Anne-Lise! A 7 for certain! Hugs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 8:09:00 AM - Thanks Demetrios, for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2016 3:40:00 PM wow, this is so sweet and the message is awesome! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 8:07:00 AM - Andrea, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 8/16/2016 3:40:00 PM wow, this is so sweet and the message is awesome! Login to Reply

Nette Onclaud Date: 8/16/2016 12:56:00 PM you have the heart of a child, dear anne.. so wonderfully expressed.. happy day with hugggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 8:07:00 AM - Thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 8/16/2016 12:14:00 PM Wonderful write, Anne-Lise, my favorite line is, "Blown sweet strawberries kiss". Hugs Eve Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 8:06:00 AM - Dear Eve, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper Date: 8/16/2016 12:13:00 PM Wonderful write, Anne-Lise, my favorite line is, "Blown sweet strawberries kiss". Hugs Eve Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 8/16/2016 11:52:00 AM A beautiful tender write Anne Lise:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 8:06:00 AM - Thanks Jan, for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 8/16/2016 9:57:00 AM Beautifully done Anne-Lise...a winner in my eyes...god bless the children and you...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2016 8:05:00 AM - W.W., thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith Date: 8/16/2016 9:08:00 AM Sweet entry Anne-Lise, best wishes in the contest... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2016 2:41:00 PM - Charlie, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick Date: 8/16/2016 8:24:00 AM Enjoyed reading your work..Yes, sometimes even in the best of homes children suffer..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2016 2:41:00 PM - Yes, it's really true Sara - thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith Date: 8/16/2016 8:00:00 AM Such truth A-L we must believe in ourselves. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2016 2:40:00 PM - We must believe in the children, Tim - thanks for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner Date: 8/16/2016 7:56:00 AM Anne-Lise, you are such a lovable teddy bear! You have such a kind heart and gentle soul. This is a tender write which displays what I'm talking about. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts and words. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/16/2016 2:38:00 PM - ... and I love your long silky ears, Daniel :)- Thanks for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)