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Bless all the world's children Between earth and the stars Believe that you are loved Beauty grows in the heart Blown sweet strawberries kiss Brushed cotton angel wing Breathe deeply start to fly http://www.howmanysyllables.com Each line has only 6 syllables (poem in the Pleiades form) - Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)

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Bl Devnath

Date: 8/28/2016 2:10:00 PM

It's a beautiful gem of beautiful heartfelt expression my lovely lovely friend. A great 7. Hugs, Cloudy poet, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/28/2016 3:03:00 PM

- Bl, thanks for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 8/19/2016 9:55:00 AM

Fabulous poem, awesome message.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2016 12:08:00 PM

- Thanks Scott, for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joanna Daniel

Date: 8/19/2016 6:19:00 AM

Children are truly God's gifts to man:)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/19/2016 6:31:00 AM

- Thanks for friendly visits and comments, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/18/2016 12:22:00 PM

A 7 for this lovely, moving poem! Janice

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/18/2016 12:52:00 PM

- Janice, thanks for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/18/2016 11:20:00 AM

what a beauty, anne, children are the best gifts of heaven... huggs and happy day!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/18/2016 12:51:00 PM

- Thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 8/17/2016 5:37:00 AM

Superbly written dear, Anne-Lise! A 7 for certain! Hugs!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2016 8:09:00 AM

- Thanks Demetrios, for the beautiful comments a 7 and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2016 3:40:00 PM

wow, this is so sweet and the message is awesome!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2016 8:07:00 AM

- Andrea, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/16/2016 3:40:00 PM

wow, this is so sweet and the message is awesome!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/16/2016 12:56:00 PM

you have the heart of a child, dear anne.. so wonderfully expressed.. happy day with hugggs

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2016 8:07:00 AM

- Thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2016 12:14:00 PM

Wonderful write, Anne-Lise, my favorite line is, "Blown sweet strawberries kiss". Hugs Eve

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2016 8:06:00 AM

- Dear Eve, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/16/2016 12:13:00 PM

Wonderful write, Anne-Lise, my favorite line is, "Blown sweet strawberries kiss". Hugs Eve

Jan Allison

Date: 8/16/2016 11:52:00 AM

A beautiful tender write Anne Lise:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2016 8:06:00 AM

- Thanks Jan, for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/16/2016 9:57:00 AM

Beautifully done Anne-Lise...a winner in my eyes...god bless the children and you...^WW^

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/17/2016 8:05:00 AM

- W.W., thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/16/2016 9:08:00 AM

Sweet entry Anne-Lise, best wishes in the contest...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2016 2:41:00 PM

- Charlie, thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/16/2016 8:24:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work..Yes, sometimes even in the best of homes children suffer..Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2016 2:41:00 PM

- Yes, it's really true Sara - thanks for the beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith

Date: 8/16/2016 8:00:00 AM

Such truth A-L we must believe in ourselves.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2016 2:40:00 PM

- We must believe in the children, Tim - thanks for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Daniel Turner

Date: 8/16/2016 7:56:00 AM

Anne-Lise, you are such a lovable teddy bear! You have such a kind heart and gentle soul. This is a tender write which displays what I'm talking about. Thank you for sharing your kind thoughts and words.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 8/16/2016 2:38:00 PM

- ... and I love your long silky ears, Daniel :)- Thanks for beautiful comments and enjoyable visit - hugs // Anne-Lise :)