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look up at the skies the diamonds on black velvet - enchanting beauty with a royal view universe sublime aspects - touched a twinkling star mixed in ecstasy if i could only catch one - in bed at midnight to ascend the sky moon guards the treasure as gold - prayer of twilight quiet dreams under the sky - that night a star fell nearby 30.05.2023 Anne-Lise Andresen Copyright © All Rights Reserved Haiku Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Joanna Daniel 2nd place in the contest

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Anonomus Scorpio

Date: 6/27/2023 3:47:00 PM

Hello my fellow star gazer :) "quiet dreams under the sky - that night a star fell nearby" Not too many can make me swoon in just one line but this is fav worthy all by itself...With Warmth A.S.

Terry Miller

Date: 6/14/2023 2:02:00 AM

Oh, this is beautiful, such imagery, congratulations

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/13/2023 4:48:00 PM

Diamond stars on black velvet…so pretty!

Sotto Poet

Date: 6/13/2023 4:15:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Anne-Lise, your poem was so charming

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/13/2023 1:27:00 AM

Magical and dreamy, Anne-Lise, congratulations:)

Robert Lindley

Date: 6/5/2023 10:42:00 AM

A star embossed spectacled view inked in fine poetic verses my friend. Very fine poetry. A fav..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 12:20:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment and the fave, Robert :) - hugs

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 6/1/2023 5:16:00 PM

You have created such beautiful magic, love it, gl in the contest Anne :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 12:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Vie Rose :) - hugs

Alexis Y.

Date: 6/1/2023 5:35:00 AM

WoW! Anne-Lise, This is just beautiful! I enjoyed the view. Best wishes in the contest. Have a wonderful day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 12:19:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Alexis :) - hugs

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/31/2023 6:55:00 PM

a truly sublime and sweet dream-wish, Anne-Lise. Painting of gold. :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 12:18:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Gershon :) - hugs

Valsa George

Date: 5/31/2023 9:09:00 AM

A star studded night is a marvel of creation, an arresting spectacle and a joy to view. You have beautifully pictured the night sky in shining images! All the Best dear Ann. Hugs ...

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 6/7/2023 12:18:00 PM

- Many thanks for your comment, Valsa :) - hugs