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- Break Not A Flower Nor Inscribe A Stone -




I feel it so strongly deep inside the cry of your heart
It but echoes my souls endless fear of being apart 

Use your strength to go on with life even though it is hard
Where is life’s joy when treated with such reckless disregard?

I wonder can I ever free you from this endless pain?
My body and soul are laden with such cold heavy chain

Lead me through the maze of your mind, let me break down the wall
The donjon has been built of adamant and shall not fall!
 
I will rend the dark veil and bright starlight will fill your soul 
The battlements long secure crumble, your love makes me whole! 



Written by Shane Cooper & A-L Andresen 25.03.2015
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 4/14/2015 1:10:00 PM
A great collaboration, powerful words. Excellent write and title. Hugs
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Date: 4/14/2015 1:12:00 PM
- Cecilia, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 4/1/2015 6:04:00 AM
A passionate colaberation an enjoyable read.
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Date: 4/1/2015 8:04:00 AM
- M.Y.A., thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/31/2015 1:11:00 PM
Wonderful collaboration. The love shines through every word.
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Date: 3/31/2015 1:25:00 PM
- Yes, a write from our hearts Scott - I'm glad you enjoy this co write - Thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/30/2015 12:19:00 PM
This is a remarkable poem. :D Wonderful job! -DAY_Vid
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Date: 3/30/2015 1:14:00 PM
- J.W.M., thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/30/2015 12:20:00 PM
Great collab I meant to say! OOps
Date: 3/30/2015 2:22:00 AM
Lovely colaberation Anne Lise, hope you are well, beautiful words my dear, take care..............Vera...........
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:26:00 AM
- Dear Vera, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2015 8:30:00 PM
A7 and adding this one to my fav poem list.. Bravooooooo, huge congrats to both poets!!!!!
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:25:00 AM
- Robert, thank you for the lovely words, a 7, fav. and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2015 4:15:00 PM
What a lovely collaboration Anne, Both your words are truly beautiful!! Best Wishes Kevin
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:24:00 AM
- Kevin, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/29/2015 12:27:00 PM
I noticed this write earlier, and my eeeebrain took a slight pitzzz for the second ! Very moving write dear poet ! What men and women need desperately to embrace ! Awesome Anna Lise ! Have a good one......much love, james
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Date: 3/30/2015 6:23:00 AM
- James, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2015 2:16:00 PM
Terrific verse. Well done, both of you. Regards, Viv
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Date: 3/28/2015 2:22:00 PM
- Viv, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2015 8:10:00 AM
Beautiful! It is like a romantic quest of old where the knight undertakes to rescue his fair lady.
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Date: 3/28/2015 9:04:00 AM
- Monterey, thanks for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/28/2015 8:05:00 AM
Oh great collaboration both of you! ;)
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Date: 3/28/2015 9:04:00 AM
- Thanks Casarah, for visiting and lovely comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2015 10:08:00 AM
Excellent collab Anne...love it.... 7
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Date: 3/27/2015 12:46:00 PM
- Joseph, thank you for the lovely words a 7 and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2015 9:52:00 AM
Sad, but loving write with emotions of the heart between two souls. A wonderful Collaboration , Anne-Lise and Shane, A 7 ++Blessings and hugs to both of you Eve
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Date: 3/27/2015 12:46:00 PM
- Eve, thank you for the lovely words a 7 and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2015 9:43:00 AM
Enjoyed your collaboration..Thanks for stopping by.Sara
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Date: 3/27/2015 9:54:00 AM
- Dear Sara, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2015 9:11:00 AM
A great collaboration! I hope you have a nice weekend as well. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 3/27/2015 9:13:00 AM
- Richard, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/27/2015 5:09:00 AM
Love brought out open in the light gives the lovers such wondrous pleasure as spoken of in your collab, my dear friend. Congratulations on such wonderful artistry. A 7. Here' to a great new day! Hugs and smiles! Kim :)
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Date: 3/27/2015 7:31:00 AM
- Dear Kim, thank you for the lovely words, a 7 and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2015 5:23:00 PM
A beautiful credit goes to you both the nice friends for the nice collaboration. 7++ i feel here. Loved always, my lovely friend,bl
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Date: 3/27/2015 3:33:00 AM
- Dear Bl, thank you for the lovely words, a 7 and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2015 1:11:00 PM
Beautiful pen Anne Lise! A nice poem filled of much love friendship caring,my dear friend.A 7++!I really hope that everything is better for you today Anne.Honestly just truly worried concerned.I pray for your dad too.I'm always keeping you and all in my prayers.smiling.I'm always here if you ever need me for anything.Wishing you a very lovely day!In his light!God bless you!:)Love and hugs! xxx D.
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:49:00 PM
- Much love back and thank you for the beautiful words from you my dear friend Dorian :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2015 8:40:00 AM
Wonderful poem filled with love and happy thoughts. The author used superb imagery and gentle words to bring her feelings to the page and into our hearts. Emile.
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Date: 3/26/2015 1:50:00 PM
- Emile, thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2015 4:15:00 AM
wonderful words of light and inspiration, and a collab that truly uplifts.. i hope you are doing self-care, anne.. a happy friday with huggs
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:52:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem, dear Nette - (no time for "self-care" :)) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/26/2015 3:34:00 AM
Sweet Anne Lise my amiga, :)! your heart and soul is as gentle as how you inscribe these words together with Shane Cooper.. :) I hope all is well with you... with your father and you are coping well.. :)! I esp like the 2nd to the last set.. :)! The lines are filled with some sadness yet there there a shun of light...love.. :)! hugs!//olive eloisa
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:12:00 AM
- You're right - sadness .... but, we got "the sun" back - All "flowers" need to be watered :) - (my father: no improvement) - thanks for many pleasant visits, dear friend Olive - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2015 10:27:00 PM
This is an excellent and uplifting poem my very dear friends, Anne Lise and Shane! I love and enjoyed so much. Hugs to both of you. Thank you! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:34:00 AM
- Much love back and thank you for the beautiful words from you my dear friend Leonora :) - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2015 8:19:00 PM
A wonderful collaboration from the two of you...passionate and powerful! Hugs, Rhonda
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:29:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely words and visit at our poem, Rhonda - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2015 5:09:00 PM
Sweet lady, Thank you for sharing your words with me when I had ran out of my own. You are an Angel. All my love Shane xxx
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:22:00 AM
- Sometimes we need to "nursing" our "flowers" (friends) we are all flowers that need love and caring ..... even the dandelion :) - Thank you my friend, Shane - hugs and <3 // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 3/25/2015 4:01:00 PM
dropping back to comment on your write with Shane - brilliant collaboration it flows so beautifully:-) hugs jan xx 7 xx
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Date: 3/26/2015 4:27:00 AM
- Thank you for the lovely words, a 7 and visit at our poem, dear Jan :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)