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No one can see my eyes they a covered with dark sunglasses Dark as my soul and my thoughts When life goes in grim backstreets it's reflected by a deeper truth about who I am My most penetrating screams are always silent Why should life be so difficult, where we wear a mask ? The underside of my wings, will lead me away into another reality There is a lot of mystery attached to the theater of life Out and in of different roles and various performances - placed in a centrifuge When I feel I fall eight feet straight down while, in reality, I'm sitting in bed The choices are that I don't need to to identify me or my own experience with the content of my thoughts 25.09.2019 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved In the backstreets of my mind Sponsored by: Silent One 2nd place in the contest

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Timothy Mcguire

Date: 6/19/2020 11:08:00 PM

Just found your work. Very good!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 7/19/2020 2:23:00 PM

- Thank you very much, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2019 7:07:00 AM

Back with congrats Anne-Lise on your podium win.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2019 7:59:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Timothy Mcguire

Date: 9/26/2019 8:58:00 PM

Fab Sunshine! A FAV for me, congrats

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2019 1:56:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting, the fave and congratulations, Timothy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France

Date: 9/26/2019 4:07:00 PM

Anne-Lise congratulations on your win in the contest with this excellent poem and what an awesome image !

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2019 1:55:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and congratulations, D.H. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 9/26/2019 3:33:00 PM

Damn, i guess all our minds are a black veil to an extent... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/27/2019 1:54:00 AM

- Many thanks for a great contest and my place on the winning list, S.O. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 9/26/2019 10:09:00 AM

Hi Anne-Lise - what a terrific poem and so deep - I love the last three lines of this write - perfect! Such imaginative thoughts expressed beautifully. Hugs and blessings dear friend Jennifer.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 12:01:00 PM

- Always a pleasure to read your comments dear sister, many thanks :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands

Date: 9/25/2019 12:52:00 PM

Great one Anne-Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:59:00 AM

- Heidi, thank you for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Quoth Theraven

Date: 9/25/2019 10:57:00 AM

Anne-Lise, Sunshine Smile's "Black Veil".,well-spun centrifuge. What a dichotomy. -Richard

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:58:00 AM

- Thank you for visiting and lovely comment, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/25/2019 9:07:00 AM

Anne-Lise, this poem would have been enough. "There is a lot of mystery attached to the theater of life" Nice one!

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:57:00 AM

- Many thanks Caren, for visiting and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/25/2019 7:47:00 AM

So eloquently you captured the thoughts behind the veil, Anne-Lise! A winning poem you wrote.

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:57:00 AM

- Many thanks for visiting and lovely comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham

Date: 9/25/2019 7:37:00 AM

There's a whole world within ourselves of its paths only we tread. Our lives birth, life and death are all within its confines. Good luck. Tom

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:41:00 AM

- Tom, many thanks for your visit and comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Chris Green

Date: 9/25/2019 7:05:00 AM

This was exceptional my friend. Deep and dark but so well written. This is a poem to get lost in, your thoughts and visions are wonderfully expressed. Best wishes in the contest

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:41:00 AM

- Many thanks for your visit and comment, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/25/2019 5:34:00 AM

This is a excellent poem and I enjoyed it and hope it does great in the contest,. Blessings

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 9/25/2019 5:01:00 AM

Wow, liking everything -- that photo! OMgoodness! ~ Aloha always William

Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/26/2019 11:31:00 AM

- Thank you very much, William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)