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November calls for my attention autumn is drawing to final A trembling aspen naked the leaves are autumn's spoils Cool air hits the cheek the clear flames fade Hibernates gray shroud sad 06.11.2022 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved A November Nonet Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Andrea Dietrich (howmanysyllables.com) 5rd place in the contest

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Susan Ashley

Date: 11/26/2022 8:45:00 AM

Dear Anne-Lise, your expressive poem finds both the beauty and the sadness in "an ordinary November day". Enchanting imagery enthralls my imagination. Congratulations for your excellent win in Andrea's contest. Warmest wishes and hugs.. ~Susan

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2022 4:43:00 PM

I enjoyed the feeling your poem evoked in me, Anne-Lise. Congrats for the win and thanks for your participation.

Paul Callus

Date: 11/8/2022 1:20:00 AM

The fallen leaves and the naked aspen are a clear sign that November and autumn are both on the way out. Soon, that cool air will be much colder. ~ Sending you warm regards brighten the atmosphere, my friend! Hugs // paul

Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 11/7/2022 4:35:00 PM

Wonderful Nonet, Dear Anne-Lise. Loved your poem with so much depth - in few words, you have portrayed the beauty and profound sadness of November.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/7/2022 1:47:00 PM

Winter following a beautiful fall can be kind of sad especially so for those who suffer from SAD. I enjoyed reading this one today. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara

Joanna Daniel

Date: 11/7/2022 7:02:00 AM

Imagery profound, Sunshine:)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 11/7/2022 5:42:00 AM

Well written poem Anne-Lise, lauding the turn of the season as it hibernates.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 11/7/2022 2:30:00 AM

You have incarnated a day of November in all its glory, dearest, Anne-Lise. Beautifully done. Hugs xxx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/7/2022 1:26:00 AM

I already feel the chill of December.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 11/6/2022 11:12:00 PM

An enchanting descriptive piece with feeling and emotion. Thanks Sunshine I am going to read it again.

Valsa George

Date: 11/6/2022 8:31:00 PM

November is colorful and gloomy all at once. The bright hues make us happy, but the withering leaves and naked trees leave us sad. Great nonet, dear Smile. All the Best... ! Love and hugs!

Howard Kerr

Date: 11/6/2022 3:52:00 PM

Sunshine Smile, You have created a haunting piece of enduring quality. Excellent flow and imagery. Good luck in contest. I value your comment on my Footle. Howard

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 11/6/2022 3:28:00 PM

Your words describe the sadness of seeing November gone as winter sets in Love it. love phyl

Laura Leiser

Date: 11/6/2022 1:54:00 PM

You aptly describe the vision and melancholy feelings of November in this poem, Anne Lise! Enjoyed this one, and good luck in the contest! :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 11/6/2022 10:47:00 AM

Oh, so sweet and lovely Nonet, Anne-Lise. Your wonderful metaphors are shining even reflecting some sad thoughts at the ending..., Best wishes for the contest