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Eri proprio tu, E per un attimo ti ho visto accanto a me. Nella mia confusione c'eri tu In mezzo a tutta questa gente indifferente C'eri proprio tu! ... In ogni mia distrazione c'eri tu Tra i rumori intermittenti della pioggia Io ti ho visto qui... Ma adesso... Dove sei? web —

Thru autumn darkness Too strange, always when the rain comes The man in the dark timelessly elegant, mysterious and silent Where does he come from ? Through a black hole ? Nobody knows him, remains a stranger Like the passage of darkness He is printed in black ink A mystery that no one can solve Entry in an unknown face 28.09.2017 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved

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Date: 10/9/2017 6:55:00 PM
i love the mystery
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/10/2017 2:34:00 AM
- Marlon, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/5/2017 3:19:00 PM
Your poem perfectly describes the scene, but even more intrigue I think I see his face in the picture.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2017 3:01:00 AM
- Alesia, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/3/2017 1:43:00 PM
Mystery of your golden ink surely. Loved to read this exceptional poem my lovely dear friend. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/6/2017 2:59:00 AM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and lovely comment, Bl :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/2/2017 2:10:00 AM
Sunshine, I really loved this. My kind of poetry!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2017 4:54:00 AM
- R.e., thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/2/2017 12:45:00 AM
I absolutely love the mystery here. Love, Juli-Michelle
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/2/2017 1:06:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Juli-Michelle :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2017 2:43:00 PM
reminds me of autumn equinox... love the mystery behind this appealing verse, anne... happy huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 2:46:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2017 2:18:00 PM
Excellent picture..Your wording aply describes the pic..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 2:23:00 PM
- Sara, thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2017 8:29:00 AM
He is the shadow man with a faceless face...and I do think he does come from a black hole lol...great mystery Anne-Lise...god bless and (((HUGS)))...^WW^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 2:22:00 PM
- Who knows where he comes from ... not me :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2017 8:22:00 AM
Don't worry about it - just take the chocolates !
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 8:29:00 AM
.... - Does he have chocolate ? - :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit, Peter - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2017 12:26:00 PM
Love a good mystery, I wonder...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 8:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Charlie - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/30/2017 12:23:00 PM
Very intriguing Anne-Lise your poems are always so well written. Have a wonderful weekend
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 10/1/2017 8:24:00 AM
- Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Vincent :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2017 3:58:00 PM
so thought-provoking you leave me wanting more of this mystery, anne... greeat lines.. happy huggs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2017 5:57:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2017 3:51:00 PM
This is intriguing for sure. Who he is could solve the world's problems. This is great Anne-Lise! Your words describe that painting better than I coitus have every dreamt.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/30/2017 5:56:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, James - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2017 8:03:00 AM
Ahhh i love a good mystery Anne-Lise. if you happen to find out the identity of this intriguing stranger, pray do tell....Maria xxx
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Maria Williams
Date: 9/29/2017 8:16:00 AM
Same to you too, and if you're up for a mystery, I've written a second part to my 'Memories'. Be warned its long...Maria xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 8:13:00 AM
- I'll call you, Maria :) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment :) - Happy weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2017 6:57:00 AM
Wow, the mystery man, great poem, Anne-lise, and I'm saving the painting, it's really inspirational:)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 7:02:00 AM
- ... only the painting :))) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment, Jo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2017 6:28:00 AM
Intriguingly beautiful ...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 7:04:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you, Probir :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/29/2017 4:35:00 AM
The face of a stranger, an unknown man, timeless in his appearance, signifying an absence of knowledge, the reality of who he really is! Like you have said, a mystery is sometimes very fun and exciting at the same time! Sometimes frightening however, but certainly intriguing! I really enjoyed your tremendous poem here this morning my friend! Such a wondrous piece, Great Work!!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 7:03:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Russell :) - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 6:29:00 PM
Ohh I love this mysterious write Ann-Lise. A very thought provoking write and I love the painting posted as well. Nicely done! :)
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 2:52:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment, Susan :) - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 4:50:00 PM
Hi Anne-Lise , mystery man like a shadow in the wind , lovely write and pic my friend ::)))))) hugs
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Niall Fulham
Date: 9/29/2017 6:14:00 PM
Happy weekend my friend ::)))) hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 1:49:00 AM
- Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you, Niall :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 4:21:00 PM
Nothing wrong with a mystery... Deep write.. Maybe he is just a figment of your imagination..
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/29/2017 1:49:00 AM
- No, nothing wrong with a mystery S.O. :) - Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 2:39:00 PM
He remains an enigma and I guess he would never admit where he's from Anne Lise!:-) hugs jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 2:44:00 PM
- Life or after life on earth ... who knows? ... an exciting thought :) - Many thanks for your comment - Always nice to see you, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 2:25:00 PM
Mysteries are the wonderment of life to ponder
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 2:46:00 PM
- I love mysteries, Tim :) - Thank you for your friendly visit and lovely comment - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/28/2017 2:18:00 PM
I see the black ink on him, Anne-Lise--this sounds like a mystery--face of unknown that comes in the end??
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 9/28/2017 2:49:00 PM
- Maybe he does not have a face - Many thanks, Vijay - Always a pleasure to read your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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