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- a Profound Truth -

So apathetic
Convincing crocodile tears 
Focus on the truth
He felt he mastered this game
The cheats syndrome is revealed













03.10.2018
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Vladislav Raven Date: 10/8/2018 9:11:00 AM Hi Anne-Lise, indeed this is a truth. I always believe that untruths shall come back to bite you sooner or later. Everyone would know as soon as a lie left my lips. Sooner or later the truth becomes known. To lie is the cowards way. A strong write Anne-Lise. Have a wonderful Monday. Hugs....Mike. XX Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/8/2018 12:28:00 PM - Yes, very cowardly Mike - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Adeniji Toluwalope Gideon Date: 10/7/2018 9:56:00 AM In the end, the truth prevails. Nice craft, dear Sunshine Smile. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/8/2018 12:26:00 PM - I hope so - Many thanks for your visit and comment, Adeniji :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One Date: 10/4/2018 9:18:00 AM some sad people in this world, some big liars who hide behind their fakeness.... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 1:15:00 PM - Cowardly and pathetic ... I will call it, S.O. - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mike Gentile Date: 10/3/2018 2:51:00 PM It may not be directed at a specific person but I can think of one right now !!! Well done Anne-Lise xxoo Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 1:12:00 PM - The fear of losing face ... or the fear of the truth (?) - When someone is revealed with his pants down ... should one speak the truth - Many thanks for your comment, Mike :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud Date: 10/3/2018 2:37:00 PM truth rules, anne... a beauty to reflect on...happy huggs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 1:06:00 PM - Many thanks for your comment, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 10/3/2018 1:24:00 PM Truly profound truth my dearest friend, Anne-Lise! I love it! Hugs xxx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 1:05:00 PM - Thank you so much Demetrios, for your very kind comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Winged Warrior Date: 10/3/2018 12:25:00 PM Oh! very well said in such a few words Anne-Lise...great write...love & light...^WW^ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 1:05:00 PM - Thank you so much for your very kind comment, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Ilene Bauer Date: 10/3/2018 12:24:00 PM well, i know just who this poem makes me think of, anne-lise! you've said it very well... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 1:03:00 PM - Not hard to understand who I have in my thoughts .... but they are many ... very many and it scares me - People like this should never have "power", Ilene - Many thanks for your comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tom Cunningham Date: 10/3/2018 9:18:00 AM Sadly they are everywhere Sunshine, I do not know how they sleep at night. Tom Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 12:57:00 PM - Hope they have nightmares :) - Thank you, Tom - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart Date: 10/3/2018 9:16:00 AM Succinct x Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 7:56:00 AM - Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Maureen :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 10/3/2018 7:38:00 AM Yes-- well said Anne-Lise. Power and hunger for power is absolutely corrupting. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/4/2018 7:55:00 AM - Thank you so much for your very kind comment, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 10/3/2018 7:23:00 AM Very deep my friend I Hope they read it Anne lise I detest liars and cheats! Hugs Jan xx 5np Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/3/2018 7:36:00 AM - A dirty and dishonest game ... for power ... no, I do not like it - Many thanks for your comment, Jan - hugs // Anne-Lise :)