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- a Perfect Rhythm -

The touch of spring

                                      A dream with no sleep

                                      Rewind back and forth

                                  Yellow light, I'm gonna smile



                                           Just for me to be

                                         With all of my heart

                                       Living those moments

                                      with joy and enthusiasm













02.05.2017
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 5/29/2017 9:37:00 PM
A divine rhythm indeed. Beautifully pictured my dear friend. Loved always, bl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/30/2017 2:51:00 AM
- Bl thanks, your visit and support is greatly appreciated :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/12/2017 12:48:00 AM
You paint the beauty of spring through gorgeous words as if it is a part of you Anne-Lise:) Stunning, happy imagery, a joy to read. many blessings to you xxx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/12/2017 3:13:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, my friend Lynn :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/10/2017 4:30:00 PM
Spring is in the air and love the picture that goes with this poem. Just had dental work done and now need to pull a tooth next month. I hope that after this next month all will be back to normal for me. love phyl
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/11/2017 2:10:00 AM
- Phyllis, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/7/2017 2:55:00 PM
What a lovely musical piece Anne-Lise:) Amitiés
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/8/2017 12:37:00 PM
- Many thanks for friendly visits and comments, Anne-Marie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/4/2017 7:30:00 AM
I hope that means that spring is finally there Dear Anne-Lise? A lovely poem to welcome it, and such a cute picture to go with it. A7++
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2017 11:25:00 AM
- Yes, hurray finally came the spring Maria :))) - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 9:05:00 PM
So beautiful... A perfect title... I enjoyed it... A big 7...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2017 11:25:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, Supraja :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 6:22:00 PM
So beautifully uplifting, Anne-Lise. I enjoyed reading your poem today! Hugs, Sandra
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/4/2017 11:28:00 AM
- Sandra, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 2:20:00 PM
Lovely, I hope that's a picture of someone you know...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:26:00 PM
- No, I do not know this girl ... but she's cute :) - Charlie, many thanks for your visit and great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 11:48:00 AM
Beautiful Spring poem Anne-Lise.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 11:54:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Elizabeth :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 11:29:00 AM
Beautiful picture you paint of the awakening of spring
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 11:32:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 8:27:00 AM
Aah ..the sweet fragrance of spring..wonderful write Anne
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 8:44:00 AM
- Joseph, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/3/2017 2:34:00 AM
Marvelous depiction of spring my friend, Anne-Lise! Finally spring has arrived over there! Rejoice! A beautiful 7! Hugs
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:40:00 AM
- Yes, finally it's come ... the trees start to turn green and the birds sing :) - Many thanks for your visit a 7 and lovely comments, my friend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 7:25:00 PM
Just beautiful, Anne-Lise! Strikingly so!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:43:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, W.W. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 4:29:00 PM
A happy, fun, smile producing poem that brings spring right into my heart. Beautifully done my friend.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:41:00 AM
- Chris, many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 4:20:00 PM
Absolutely enchanting and so uplifting Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:44:00 AM
- Finally, spring has come !!! :))) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 4:09:00 PM
Hello Dear Anne-Lise, All I can say here is that "A Perfect Rhythm" is wondrous, marvelous, and full of joyful enchantment. Very beautiful and quite meaningful. Superb!! TR/FAVE. Cheers and Best, Gary
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:47:00 AM
- A great honor with a seven + fav. Gary - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 5/2/2017 3:21:00 PM
making sure: 1 2 3 4 5 6 7
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:48:00 AM
:))) .... and finally " a fav." :)))
Date: 5/2/2017 3:20:00 PM
Seven. For representing Heaven you know. Shalom
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 5/3/2017 2:50:00 AM
- Earth's heavenly nature ... I love spring :) - Many thanks for your visit and lovely comments, Anil :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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