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- A Lot Of Candy -

                                       I eat caramel so it slams
                                 Pink cotton candy tastes like jam
                                     Chocolate melts in my mouth
                               Licorice laces eaten meters and meters
                               Sour candies gives me tears in my eyes
                                    Lollipops how sweet and delicious
                                                 I`m so sticky
                                    and I have such pain in my teeth











19. June. 2012
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Mustapha Mohammed Date: 8/1/2013 3:26:00 PM Lovely write,now heres me going to get me one also.Hugs Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/1/2013 3:29:00 PM - Mustapha, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 12/11/2012 9:46:00 AM you have got me going here, i'm just reaching into the lolly Jar,, like this fun poem... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 12/11/2012 9:49:00 AM Harry, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Laura Breidenthal Date: 8/17/2012 12:38:00 PM Very very cute! :D Always, Laura Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 8/17/2012 12:39:00 PM Laura, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

Robert Pettit Date: 7/12/2012 2:23:00 PM Oral bacteria turn the sucrose into pyruvic acid, and that in turn erodes the teeth. Brushing your teeth is so important. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 7/13/2012 8:09:00 AM Robert, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cindy Cayton Date: 6/29/2012 4:52:00 AM Oh by the way, before you bake them, take a fork and flatten them out by making a mark with the fork vertically and horizonally. :) next week short bread ccokies, its easy, used to make them for the kids when they wanted something sweet, and we didn't have much. :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2012 6:51:00 AM I will try....thank you. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cindy Cayton Date: 6/29/2012 4:47:00 AM I got your sweet com, I'll give you a simple recipe for perfect peanut butter cookies everytime... remember 1, 1, and 1 I cup peanut butter I Icup of Sugar I egg preheat oven at 350 degrees bake for 8-10 minutes They are scruptious, and they don't even have flour in them. I was amazed! Have a great day, before long, you'll be the cookie Queen... :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/29/2012 6:50:00 AM Thank you Cindy.....you are the cookie Queen. :) - oxox love Anne-Lise

Courtney Courtney Date: 6/28/2012 1:17:00 PM to much sweets Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/28/2012 1:24:00 PM Yes, to much - thank you Ruth for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Gail Debole Date: 6/28/2012 5:19:00 AM Hi Anne Lise - I am probably going to have to have some candy today! Your poem has inspired my taste buds. - Gail Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/28/2012 7:16:00 AM Gail, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Laurel Larison Date: 6/26/2012 6:51:00 AM that is very good. I loved candy as a child, It was one thing I looked forward too. Great write my friend ! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/26/2012 6:54:00 AM Laurel, thank you for visit and comments my Candy. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Matthew Anish Date: 6/24/2012 9:32:00 AM One might gain weight simply by reading this poem! Tasty work! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/24/2012 10:09:00 AM Matthew, thank you for visit my Candy poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Audrey Haick Date: 6/23/2012 1:20:00 PM : )) This is tempting and as sweet as the candies described, Anne Lise. Thanks for commenting on my latest. Yes, I've been away for awhile. Love, Annalise Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 1:24:00 PM Annalise, thank you for visit and comments my Candy poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Kasim Ishmael Date: 6/23/2012 11:51:00 AM hello my friend anne lise i like candy too ,very nice like itand you make me want to eat some candy right now Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 1:23:00 PM Kasim, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Cindy Lu Date: 6/23/2012 11:24:00 AM aw, a very sweet poem literally in all aspects. Thank you for always supporting my poetry. Appologies for not remarking yours more oft. Much Love, Cindy Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 11:28:00 AM Cindy, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Don Johnson Date: 6/23/2012 3:56:00 AM sounds about right, sore teeth night, love it ... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 4:20:00 AM Don, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Jancarl Campi Date: 6/23/2012 2:53:00 AM Wow!! You do love sweets! I am a chocolate hound myself. Have a great day, Jancarl Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 4:19:00 AM Jancarl, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Dalila Agtani Date: 6/23/2012 1:14:00 AM Indeed you are so sweet Anne Lise! I may need some of your chocolates now before I brush my teeth! Thanks for patronizing my corner. Love Dalila Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 2:28:00 AM Dalila, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Peggy Caulfield Date: 6/22/2012 4:39:00 PM My son says he loves the poem. So do I. I guess it's because it's sweet and sticky. Can you soup mail me some chocolates. You have my sweet tooth aching. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 2:27:00 AM Big hug to your son! Thank you - and mom to. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Carma Sanderson Date: 6/22/2012 4:35:00 PM " I loved every minute of this sweet candy SENSATION, Anne-Lise... As my teeth fall out on this one, LOL!!!! Xox0 Carma, SWEETHEART Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/23/2012 2:26:00 AM Carma, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 6/21/2012 7:37:00 PM a yummy tasty treat in sweet lines of candy goo so tempting puts a smile on my face Anne Lise.. chocolate kissws to the rescue luv.. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/22/2012 12:40:00 AM L-M - thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Debbie Guzzi Date: 6/21/2012 3:06:00 PM awww LOL you had to go ruin it by reminding me of MY TEETH LOL..my fav is licorice..black & full of molasses! Light & Love Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/22/2012 12:39:00 AM Debbie, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Erich Goller Date: 6/21/2012 1:36:00 PM All that sweet will do that. A lovely sweet delicious poem.I enjoyed reading it,God bless you. Hugs!Erich Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2012 1:40:00 PM Erich, thank you for visit and comments my small poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Nette Onclaud Date: 6/21/2012 12:54:00 PM you are my candy girl, anne... have a fine day!!..:) hugggs! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2012 12:59:00 PM Welcome to have some candy,Nette - oxox love Anne-Lise

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl Date: 6/21/2012 11:32:00 AM Sounds a nightmare to me I dislike anything sweet, nice write though xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2012 11:36:00 AM Mandy, thank you for visit and comments my poem. - oxox love Anne-Lise

Wilma Neels Date: 6/21/2012 11:19:00 AM Anne Lise, you sure have a lot of candy floating around in this delightful write of yours.. This made me smile tonight.. Hope your week is an awesome one, love & hugs Wilma Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2012 11:23:00 AM Wilma, thank you for tasted my Candy - oxox love Anne-Lise

Diane Christian Date: 6/21/2012 9:55:00 AM aww how sweet i love chocholate caramel and shoe lases and candy flos yummy, ans thanks for your kind comments Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/21/2012 9:58:00 AM Diane, thank you for tasted the Candy - oxox love Anne-Lise

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