- A Little Bit of Heaven -


Such a romantic place on a beach in Monte Carlo 
Simple little things in life catching one's breath 

Moonlight glinting of waves breaking off a white sandy beach 
Faraway thoughts brown eyes crying in an ocean dream song 

Spell of romance makes one forget the sense of anything 
Silent whispers echoes binding our chain together tides speak 

Do you remember the white doves that followed us along the beaches 
Each link in your arm magic walks closer feelings sing inside a joyous choir enchants 

Nature nurtured by the desire to fulfill dreams makes time stop 
Holds deep sea emotions a galloping white steed races home in warm waves kiss 

The natures mesmerizing perfume of fragrant flowers 
Where destiny paints the joy in butterflies dance on a warm loving breeze 

Such is the passion in the depths of ones soul 
Jewels needle vision flies without wings heaven sings in a spiral coloring rainbows 

No barriers closed no reasons withstand 
The midnight moon shades blue embraced one shadow two become one dream 





A co write written by Liam Mcdaid 
and Anne-Lise Andresen :) - 30.01.2015 - 
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Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 3/11/2015 7:00:00 PM
Great imagery, so good it cleared my mind of the stresses of the day, great job...
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 3/11/2015 7:03:00 PM
- Thanks for visiting and lovely comments from you, much appreciated your words Suburban - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/10/2015 5:13:00 PM
A pleasant romantic interlude...and thanks for the comment Anne! ...Peter
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/11/2015 7:41:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and comments, Peter - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2015 9:18:00 PM
Ah, this made me read without thinking. A heart of ones' own; brilliant.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/3/2015 2:46:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Whitney - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2015 8:27:00 AM
simply a stunning piece, anne.. i enjoyed how you touched romantic feelings with nature... awesome imagery; huggs and and happy near sunday!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 2/3/2015 2:46:00 PM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2015 7:30:00 AM
A tremendous and creative collaboration A-L.....hugs Tim
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2015 7:52:00 AM
- Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Tim - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/31/2015 6:55:00 AM
A marvel of a collaboration with Mediterranean romantic overtones! Congratulations, Liam and Anne-Lise, Anne- Lise and Liam! A seven to each!
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2015 7:56:00 AM
- Thank you, Demetrios :) - Always nice visit and lovely comments from you, really appreciate your words - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 4:25:00 PM
You two dance with an effortless ease and grace . . . sweet are the words that flow from your pens.
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2015 8:03:00 AM
- Very nice to write with Liam ..... "it flows by itself" :))) - Thanks for visiting and lovely comments from you, much appreciated your words David - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 3:33:00 PM
Well done both Anne Lise and Liam!! You two work very much in harmony. Monte Carlo is a beautiful and romantic place; been there and enjoyed every minute. Ocean dream songs and waves together with fragrant flowers capture the senses. A 7 rating for you. /x/ paul
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/31/2015 7:59:00 AM
- Monte Carlo sound very romantic, I've never been there ..... but we can dream about it - Thanks for visiting, 7 and lovely comments from you Paul, really appreciate your words - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 12:48:00 PM
Beautiful romantic write Anne....I love the butterfly line....hugs
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:45:00 PM
- Always nice with beautiful words and visit, thanks Joseph :) - // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 12:16:00 PM
A Little Bit Of Heaven made by Anne-Lise and liam. We savor the sweetness. Thanx both.Love>rajat
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:46:00 PM
- Always nice with beautiful words and visit, thanks Rajat - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 9:31:00 AM
Very romantic, you two! :) Isn't this lovely...Hugs!!!
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Date: 1/30/2015 3:50:00 PM
- I share with pleasure heaven with you, Eileen - Glad you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - hug // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 9:26:00 AM
Hello Liam and Anne Lise! So very romantic and dreamy my dearest friends Liam and Anne Lise! Wow! You just transported me there like by magic to these very nice beaches, walks and all .Just beautiful! A huge 7 +++ for each! Yes, Monaco is a nice destination to fly any day to.Enjoyed it! A very sweet poem filled of so much love promises dreams and hopes to be held very close to ones heart.smiling.Just spills romance and the sweetness of love all over..A piece of Heaven or paradise!I just love it! Very beautiful golden pens! Have a lovely evening! God bless you both always! :) Love and hugs! xxxxoxxox D.^O^
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Anne-Lise Andresen
Date: 1/30/2015 3:48:00 PM
- Dorian, thanks for the lovely comments and enjoyable visit - Always a pleasure to see you - Glad you enjoy this poem from Liam and me - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 1/30/2015 8:48:00 AM
your pen anne lise just joined perfectly love how it all fell together a pleasure writing this with you have a wonderful weekend pal
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Date: 1/30/2015 8:54:00 AM
U 2 !!!! - hug//Anne-Lise :)
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