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The creature Denies criminal guilt Pain Torture Bodily injury Captivated and frightened _ _ unreflected thoughts 24/09/2020 Sun :) - A-L Andresen :) Copyright © All Rights Reserved Paint A Picture 7 lines and 14 Words using the Septolet form Sponsored by: Joseph May 3rd place in the contest

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Date: 10/2/2020 8:17:00 AM
Pleased to return with congratulations, Anne-Lise! Well done! Hugs // paul
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Date: 10/2/2020 8:18:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/2/2020 6:54:00 AM
Congratulations my friend on your win in this contest - I really enjoyed your pic and your write. have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 10/2/2020 7:00:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your congratulations, dear Jenny :) - Have a wonderful weekend you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2020 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your win!!!
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:39:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2020 8:33:00 AM
A scary beast Anne, Nicely penned, Congrats on your win
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:40:00 AM
- Many thanks for my win in your contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 10/1/2020 5:54:00 AM
Scary writing Anne-Lise. :)) Congratulations on the win! {} Linda
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Date: 10/2/2020 1:38:00 AM
- Linda. thank you very much for your comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/26/2020 4:15:00 PM
oh my, frightening! I had forgotten this is one of the pictures. You chose a good one!
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Date: 9/27/2020 12:34:00 AM
- Many thanks for your visit, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 9:32:00 PM
Wow you sure paint a wonderful picture here, Anne-Lise, such colourful words..good luck in contest
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Date: 9/25/2020 1:37:00 AM
- Many thanks for visiting and supporting, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 3:43:00 PM
Me before my coffee.... We are double minded -- sadly a little creature in all of us. If not for the grace of God.... Sunshine, is the art work yours also? Great form.
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Date: 9/25/2020 1:35:00 AM
- I'd be afraid to wake up in the same house as you, Joe :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 2:49:00 PM
An excellent rendition of the Septolet form, Anne-Lise. Many are those who live in denial! Hugs // paul
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Date: 9/25/2020 1:32:00 AM
- Yes, many Paul ... never waste your time denying reality - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 12:12:00 PM
Great one. Well done, Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:39:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your support, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 10:12:00 AM
Wow my friend, so well and creatively written, good luck in the contest dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:38:00 PM
- They always feel "hungry", dear Jenny - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 6:12:00 AM
Indeed only a beast do not think, much to his down fall. Wise poem. ~~
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:25:00 PM
- A beast has only evil thoughts - They are manipulative and we are their victims, Victor - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 5:20:00 AM
He sure looks beastly to me, Anne-Lise. Kind of like a troll. Good luck with this well-formed entry.
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:20:00 PM
- Trolls are usually kind, Jenna :) - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 5:15:00 AM
You painted the beast in your words--well done, Anne-Lise. All the best.
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:18:00 PM
- Thank you very much for your support, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 4:11:00 AM
Anne-Lise you certainly painted a vivid picture in so few words!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:17:00 PM
- Had to fix it a bit ... hope it got better ... thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 9/24/2020 2:09:00 AM
Nice one. Good luck in the contest for you too ...
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Date: 9/24/2020 12:15:00 PM
- Many thanks for your comments and wishes, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

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