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- a Beast -

The creature
                                     Denies criminal guilt
                                                Pain
                                              Torture

                                          Bodily injury
                                  Captivated and frightened
                                   _ _  unreflected thoughts
                                         





24/09/2020
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Paint A Picture 
7 lines and 14 Words using the Septolet form
Sponsored by: Joseph May
3rd place in the contest

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Paul Callus Date: 10/2/2020 8:17:00 AM Pleased to return with congratulations, Anne-Lise! Well done! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 8:18:00 AM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 10/2/2020 6:54:00 AM Congratulations my friend on your win in this contest - I really enjoyed your pic and your write. have a wonderful weekend. Hugs and blessings Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 7:00:00 AM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, dear Jenny :) - Have a wonderful weekend you too :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Marilene Evans Date: 10/1/2020 1:38:00 PM Congratulations on your win!!! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 1:39:00 AM - Thank you very much for your congratulations, Marilene :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May Date: 10/1/2020 8:33:00 AM A scary beast Anne, Nicely penned, Congrats on your win Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 1:40:00 AM - Many thanks for my win in your contest, Joseph :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Linda Alice Fowler Date: 10/1/2020 5:54:00 AM Scary writing Anne-Lise. :)) Congratulations on the win! {} Linda Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 10/2/2020 1:38:00 AM - Linda. thank you very much for your comments and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich Date: 9/26/2020 4:15:00 PM oh my, frightening! I had forgotten this is one of the pictures. You chose a good one! Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/27/2020 12:34:00 AM - Many thanks for your visit, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman Date: 9/24/2020 9:32:00 PM Wow you sure paint a wonderful picture here, Anne-Lise, such colourful words..good luck in contest Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 1:37:00 AM - Many thanks for visiting and supporting, Harry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Joe Dimino Date: 9/24/2020 3:43:00 PM Me before my coffee.... We are double minded -- sadly a little creature in all of us. If not for the grace of God.... Sunshine, is the art work yours also? Great form. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 1:35:00 AM - I'd be afraid to wake up in the same house as you, Joe :))) - Thank you very much for your visit and comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus Date: 9/24/2020 2:49:00 PM An excellent rendition of the Septolet form, Anne-Lise. Many are those who live in denial! Hugs // paul Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/25/2020 1:32:00 AM - Yes, many Paul ... never waste your time denying reality - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Heidi Sands Date: 9/24/2020 12:12:00 PM Great one. Well done, Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:39:00 PM - Thank you very much for your support, Heidi :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jennifer Proxenos Date: 9/24/2020 10:12:00 AM Wow my friend, so well and creatively written, good luck in the contest dear soul sister. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:38:00 PM - They always feel "hungry", dear Jenny - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Victor Buhagiar Date: 9/24/2020 6:12:00 AM Indeed only a beast do not think, much to his down fall. Wise poem. ~~ Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:25:00 PM - A beast has only evil thoughts - They are manipulative and we are their victims, Victor - Many thanks for your comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jenna Logan Date: 9/24/2020 5:20:00 AM He sure looks beastly to me, Anne-Lise. Kind of like a troll. Good luck with this well-formed entry. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:20:00 PM - Trolls are usually kind, Jenna :) - Thank you very much for your great comments :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Vijay Pandit Date: 9/24/2020 5:15:00 AM You painted the beast in your words--well done, Anne-Lise. All the best. Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:18:00 PM - Thank you very much for your support, Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison Date: 9/24/2020 4:11:00 AM Anne-Lise you certainly painted a vivid picture in so few words!:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:17:00 PM - Had to fix it a bit ... hope it got better ... thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kai Michael Neumann Date: 9/24/2020 2:09:00 AM Nice one. Good luck in the contest for you too ... Login to Reply Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 9/24/2020 12:15:00 PM - Many thanks for your comments and wishes, Kai :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)