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Drop social realism and political disagreements

                          Build a spaceship with modern technology

                    You will find many functional materials in the kitchen

                                       - a journey into space

                            Where robots serve coffee and chocolate

                            You in the cockpit with your best friend

                                 and with highly skilled employees

                                             - beyond the stars

                           If your experiments were to ends in disaster

                            and your expectations are reduced to zero

                                                  Do not panic

                           Follow the Milky Way and you will find home

                                    - never forget to look at the stars

                            The irrational and the improbable seem true

                             if we are given the opportunity to believe it 







                                                  12/02/2021
                                          Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Date: 2/15/2021 3:15:00 PM
I love this, Anne-Lise. I'm always telling my husband that I can't wait to get back to my home planet (out there) ;)
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Date: 2/16/2021 1:54:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Angela :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2021 4:35:00 PM
This is fun. To Infinity and beyond. Hugs Rick.
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:15:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2021 5:52:00 AM
A writing as deep as the space itself, dearest Anne-Lise! Happy Valentines my friend. Hugs xxx
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:15:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Demetrios :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2021 2:40:00 AM
Wonderful write... so dreamy. God bless you with love and prayers, Gina
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:15:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Gina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/14/2021 12:29:00 AM
An intelligent write dear Ann... I went through an imaginative ride as I read this... following the milky way, looking at the stars...am faving this... Love n hugs.. ~ Ani
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:14:00 AM
- Thank you very much for your comments and fave, Ani :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/13/2021 5:36:00 PM
Very creative and descriptive, Anne-Lise. Janice
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Janice :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/13/2021 9:34:00 AM
Very evocative piece Anne-Lise..Keep them coming..Blessings..
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:13:00 AM
- Thank you very much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/13/2021 4:00:00 AM
Beautiful poem Anne Lise. I read somewhere that millions miles away such a planet as ours exist. ~~
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:12:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Victor :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2021 2:49:00 PM
Excelllent. As I read I could see two young space explorers building their space ship preparing to go where no man has gone before. Really good imagery for the imagination to buid on here. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:12:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2021 2:38:00 PM
your imagination is amazing Anne-lise thanks for a wonderful journey:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 2/15/2021 2:11:00 AM
- Thank you very much, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2021 2:03:00 PM
That would be quite an adventure. Your creativity always goes beyond the ordinary. Kudos for your imagination, Anne-Lise.
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Date: 2/12/2021 2:16:00 PM
- We must never forget to "play" a little ... the imagination is a good tool, thank you very much Vijay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2021 12:45:00 PM
I love the journey you’ve invited me to join, Anne-Lise! I enjoyed the ride very much...
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Date: 2/12/2021 12:54:00 PM
- So glad you enjoyed it, Ilene :) - Thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Date: 2/12/2021 11:33:00 AM
We can still look into space and dream!
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Date: 2/12/2021 11:48:00 AM
... yes ... and use our imagination :) - Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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