--N-O-W-H-E-R-E--

  ..N.O.W.H.E.R.E.. 

It was NOWHERE where I came from; I am here.
I am NOW HERE, going NOWHERE, it is clear.
Where is this place that I’m NOW HERE, a heartbeat?
The NOWHERE place it is a place that is near.

I was NOWHERE before my birth; now I’m here.
The NOW HERE part of my life is so endearing.
I do not know why I exist in this life.
The NOWHERE place that I’m going is sincere. 

 My friends are gone to the NOWHERE place land.
The NOWHERE place that I do not understand.
Nobody came to tell me what happened there.
I am NOW HERE going NOWHERE; it is planned.

The days are gone, and the end is here soon.
The NOWHERE place, to me, will appear soon.
I am NOW HERE living in pain and restless,
The soft singing of death I will hear soon.

3/4/2017  Haloo

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Date: 7/9/2017 2:09:00 PM
Hi Pashang, thank you for visiting my poem. When I read below that you painted this picture, well, color me more than impressed. It captivated me from the very start. It has such an enchanting and lovely sense to it. As for your poem, don't take the play on words part to heart. Where we came from, no one knows, but it was somewhere, same for where we're going. I enjoyed both.
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 7/10/2017 8:24:00 PM
Thanks Robert, but I know where am I coming from? it was NOWHERE!
Date: 4/4/2017 5:57:00 PM
still loving this PICTURE . It's magnificent that you did this.
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Date: 4/4/2017 6:51:00 PM
May be I should post only my paintings, since you are calling them magnificent ..... LOL.... Thanks Andrea ... Have you had a new Ghazal?
Date: 3/15/2017 7:21:00 PM
wow, did you paint this picture as well as the picture you painted with your words? What an excellent post, Pashang!
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Date: 3/15/2017 11:38:00 PM
We 're all do paint, some on paper some on canvas some on both.... Thanks Andrea
Date: 3/14/2017 9:00:00 PM
Fascinating picture is it yours poem with it also...
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Date: 3/15/2017 1:57:00 AM
Thanks Eve.
Date: 3/14/2017 7:57:00 PM
Hi Pashang, a beautiful painting to go with your beautiful words. I love the concept of your poem and it is well written. Death, to me, shall be a nowhere until the point of death, then it shall be a somewhere, not just a thought in the mind. Your journey of words goes on Pashang. This has to be a seven from me. Hugs....Mike. XX
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Date: 3/15/2017 1:54:00 AM
Thanks Mike... On my next rubai I'll talk about death....
Date: 3/12/2017 9:52:00 AM
The painting is very beautiful, Pashang, and I like your play of the words 'nowhere' and 'now here':) I'll try to write in Rubai form soon:)
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Date: 3/13/2017 2:36:00 PM
Thanks Jo...
Date: 3/10/2017 5:55:00 AM
The butterflies indicate that some life in the way of plants are somewhere or will be very soon or the butterflies can't exsist..I enjoyed seeing and reading your work..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 3/13/2017 2:35:00 PM
Thanks Sara
Date: 3/8/2017 3:16:00 PM
Yes, Pashang, we know where we are at the moment, and although we form an idea in our minds of what happens after death, it is still quite a mystery to us! I see you are not only a talented writer, but also a talented painter! Regards // paul
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Date: 3/8/2017 4:44:00 PM
Thanks Paul... the spelling of nowhere and now here are the same, but they are so so different... Thanks, yes I do paint as well.
Date: 3/8/2017 2:31:00 PM
Very beautiful painting as well your poem is thought provoking. I sincerely hope you are not in pain.
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Date: 3/9/2017 10:37:00 AM
Thank you dear..
Date: 3/7/2017 8:49:00 PM
Well done Pashang, Brilliant piece of art. Multi dimensional talent on display, thanks for sharing...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/7/2017 9:46:00 PM
You are so kind .. Thank you Charlie
Date: 3/6/2017 4:01:00 AM
Excellent write. Well penned. Thanks for sharing it,
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Date: 3/6/2017 10:11:00 AM
Thanks Ravi...
Date: 3/5/2017 6:19:00 AM
Painful nowhere ... no more elsewhere ... very powerfully written about what is inexorable ...
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Pashang Salehi
Date: 3/5/2017 11:58:00 AM
Indeed.. Thank you for your visit.
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Date: 3/5/2017 10:20:00 AM
Indeed.. Thank you for your visit.
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