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---The Stark Horizon

the stark horizon fills with sapphire night tears fall

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:30:00 PM

reading this one again... it is deep and beautiful..pd

Jasmine Turner

Date: 4/25/2011 7:03:00 PM

UMM SAD AND BORING SORRY BUT TRUE

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/21/2011 7:21:00 PM

Hi!D.G. how are you??.. I'm back and ready to POET & ROLL... Love the deep image... never seen such a sad image at night.. or is it tragedy... still enjoyed,..p.d.

Rick Parise

Date: 4/21/2011 10:41:00 AM

Pretty...!! Haiku is an art in itself....I'm always trying to improve!~NICE WORK(I've been looking into thoughs cutting words)////Thank you for my WIN in your "REAL" contest~re: anne Frank and her plight....God bless you on this Holy week of grace..............//////Your new contest has brought an inkling....;-@ Rick

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/21/2011 9:26:00 AM

I'm back to see this one again.....and also to thank you so much for the win in your Unreal (ha ha) contest.....the win was "surrearl...............but I'm thrilled you liked that poem! I constantly learn from you what to do with my poetry...and to win your contest means a lot!! THANKS!

Sharon Winter

Date: 4/21/2011 8:34:00 AM

I think those are my tears. Beautiful haiku Debbie gal, really, you are an amazing poet. A warm thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. Most grateful for the awesome surprise, truly. Love and hugs, shar xoxo

James Peranteau

Date: 4/21/2011 8:28:00 AM

The thought here may be a bit bleek dear poet, yet the Haiku is quite awesome ! Have a great week Debbie ! much love, james

Constance La France

Date: 4/21/2011 6:56:00 AM

A beautiful poem, Debbie, and thanks for my placement in your contest, I am very honored~~

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/20/2011 6:06:00 PM

Quite emotional and sentimental, Deb

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/20/2011 4:39:00 PM

Great haiku, Deb. YOu have grown much with this form!

Michael Gelb

Date: 4/20/2011 3:56:00 PM

Nice poem.

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/20/2011 8:55:00 AM

Thanks for going back and reading my work. I really like †he poem you have posted here "--- The stark horizin" It is powerful and overflows with emotion.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/20/2011 8:26:00 AM

Gloomy picture of night.Nice Haiku.Thanks for your inspiring comments at my pages---kashinath

Carrie Richards

Date: 4/20/2011 7:24:00 AM

So filled with "mood"..... wow !

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/20/2011 6:47:00 AM

emotional picture painted in your words of Haiku Debbie... vibrant and visual luv..