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pink-cheeked baby watches the summer storm silver rattles

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2012 3:29:00 PM
this is beautiful...pd
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Date: 11/11/2011 2:08:00 PM
What a sweet haiku - I think I'm beginning to see what haiku's about. I'm very glad you think I'm improving : )
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Date: 4/22/2011 5:00:00 PM
this is adorable, Debbie-- and read your comment below-- how cool to relate the rattle to lightning & thunder! silver sky & thunder :D very nice & thank you fro all your inspiring comments-- :D hugs your way & Happy Easter )
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Date: 4/22/2011 11:49:00 AM
Debbie this was a great Haiku, loved the way you wrote it.
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:55:00 PM
Hi Debbie. Love the image of the baby watching the sky light up. I'm curious, what syllable/mora patterns are OK when it's not a 5/7/5 Haiku? Many thanks for any help in trying to understand this. ~ Soulfire ~
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Date: 4/21/2011 9:32:00 PM
Such a cute image of the baby, Deb. Nice work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/21/2011 8:21:00 PM
nice D.G.. cute,..p.d.
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:59:00 PM
Hoping will be seeing a pink cheeked baby this Thanksgiving Day Debbie.. found out it will be a little girl..with silver rattles too..oh boy..lovely Haiku fitting for me tonight...luv..
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Date: 4/21/2011 7:16:00 PM
yes I was hoping you would see and hear the rattle as a indicator that there was lightening :)
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Date: 4/21/2011 5:33:00 PM
Wonderful..Are the silver ratles the lighting bolts? Brenda Atry
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Date: 4/21/2011 2:53:00 PM
Cool juxtapositioning!!
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Date: 4/21/2011 1:42:00 PM
a beautiful Haiku, enjoyed it.
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