---Peach Sunset

peach sunset stains the silhouette of night cicada’s chirp

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:23:00 PM

wow... this is a very good one... he he ...my son does not see this beautiful image...love PD

Don Johnson

Date: 6/13/2011 11:43:00 PM

Iodine sunset of the night, getting darker, not so bright, Yes lovely verse here Debbie. Old Iodine was uses extensively on cut an wounds here in Aus the last hundred years. Betadine reared its head lately? xo Don

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/10/2011 9:43:00 AM

Magnificent haiku, Deb. Truly an awesome image of sunset. Thank you for your kind words. Feeling a bit better today and am trying to catch up on some comments. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/9/2011 10:28:00 AM

vivid lines Debbie and uniquely created .. title too cool luv..

Rick Parise

Date: 6/9/2011 9:04:00 AM

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Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/8/2011 11:56:00 PM

I totally love your depiction here, Debbie-- first line alone conjures an amazing visual--heehee, ok, ok, reading this got me wanting to write haiku again :D *blush* :D

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/8/2011 9:41:00 PM

The second line is stunning, Debs!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/8/2011 6:48:00 PM

What a fantastic image iodine sunset, enjoyed it, Debbie

Rick Parise

Date: 6/8/2011 5:56:00 PM

Darn Leafhoppers......in the silence of the iodine sunset nearing twilight silhouette's dance~ from the calm a chirp of love cry out...anyway////ENJOYED!!!!!!!!!I quess I got some good imagery~~good work