---Orange Daylilies

orange daylilies bright trumpet of gray morning deer tracks in the loam

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:22:00 PM

love this...pd

Judy Ball

Date: 6/27/2011 6:37:00 PM

Nicely done with great imagery. Good stuff. God Bless, JB

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 7:14:00 PM

I love this contrast of bright trumpets and gray morning. Very cool, Debs.Are you trying out different haiku to choose the best one for Rick? Let me see your others.

Debbie Guzzi
Date: 6/24/2011 4:50:00 AM

So Andie [this was my second choice] are all 3 actually haiku?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/23/2011 7:13:00 PM

debs, in response to your "more calcium" here is the thing, my body doesn't absorb it well and I do take different supplements and I have strong bones from weight bearing training. the charlie horses I do not have that often, when I was young. horrible!!! NOw to read and comment on your poem.

Kash Poet

Date: 6/23/2011 6:17:00 AM

Wonderful imagery.Enjoyed.