---Melting Morn

a melting morn gutters muttering with slush ahhhchooooo

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:38:00 PM

bless you..lol...pd

Tina Lowery

Date: 4/13/2011 8:45:00 PM

Yes that is what I meant entombed. I don't know how to edit so i better delete it perhaps. thanks,

Nette Onclaud

Date: 3/4/2011 11:55:00 PM

hahaha.. used " achoo " also for a contest.. whohoo!! SOUP MAIL, lights..:) huggs!

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 3/4/2011 5:43:00 PM

Witty, Deb and that second to third line is superb. I wish I had written this! Well done, teacher. Thank you as always. You are a great poetess and a special presence on the Soup. Nothing will ever change that. Even me and my candid remarks and critiques! love always, underdog.

James Foulk

Date: 3/3/2011 2:44:00 PM

VERY WELL WRITTEN PIECE OF POETRY, ENJOYED READING IT. BROUGHT A SMILE WHICH I NEEDED TODAY.