---A Messy Matron

a messy matron polishes the silver-- the teapot whistles

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/23/2010 4:22:00 PM

Ahhh, this one says a lot!! Luv, andrea

Daver Austin

Date: 4/30/2010 5:49:00 AM

I think I understand this, Deborah - Put off until tomorrow by all means. Be happy! Yes? Love, daver

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/30/2010 5:41:00 AM

Massage teacher, is that for fun?

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 4/29/2010 6:30:00 AM

enjoyed, could be humurous or very heartfelt. I like both ideas!!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 4/28/2010 6:37:00 PM

I enjoyed the images

Travis Tapley

Date: 4/28/2010 6:05:00 PM

Wow! This a terrific poem! I really like the second line. I have days when i feel like the first line! Excellent work.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/28/2010 3:45:00 PM

That is the way I feel most of the time lately __like the disheveled matron..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/28/2010 3:11:00 PM

Sweet Senryu Debbie and luv your first line.. have company for a few days so am taking time commenting when I can... enjoyed your creative touch today..luv.. Linda-Marie