---A Long Soak

a long soak the company of bird song furnace hums too

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/7/2012 3:35:00 PM

loud furnace...lol...enjoyed...pd

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/2/2011 2:20:00 PM

Debs, I just love this one. GREAT haiku! It's such slow going on this laptop without mouse. I am gonna get off here soon. See ya later! andrea

Farah Chamma

Date: 3/30/2011 1:44:00 PM

A mind-soaking Haiku. Thank you for sharing. Love

James Foulk

Date: 3/30/2011 8:41:00 AM

so few words, but well said.

Carrie Richards

Date: 3/30/2011 7:54:00 AM

oh....gollly mollly this is a good one!!!! I feel it....hurry up spring weather!!!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/30/2011 6:33:00 AM

Enjoyed reading this excellent piece of poetry this morning Debbie. Thank you for sharing it. Love, Carol