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---A Green Garden Snake

a green garden snake slithers in the apple orchard mother crys rooster puffed chest pride caged birds lay hollow eggs fox father red eyed pies baked on the windowsill long shot gun in the shed

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 12/7/2012 3:37:00 PM
love these haiku... hate snakes...pd
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Date: 3/20/2011 5:22:00 AM
enjoyed Debbie. Especially this villian. Cool! Thanks for the comment and tips. no not for contests. Just writing and learning.
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Date: 3/10/2011 1:16:00 PM
Anyone guess the story this is telling?
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Date: 3/7/2011 5:32:00 AM
Great descriptives here Debbie Well Done Cookie
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Date: 3/6/2011 12:48:00 PM
Great visuals - and thanks for the haiku tips : ) Jack
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Date: 3/6/2011 8:19:00 AM
Cool one Debbie.. if for a contest..good luck.. great visuals here.. and.. appreciate on my hot lips kiss luv... am only as good as my teacher luv..
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Date: 3/5/2011 5:01:00 PM
Interesting work..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve...Sara
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