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(fulton) Autumns Harvest

F A R M E R S R E A P I N G A U T U M N S H A R V E S T F E E D I N G S T A R V E D N A T I O N S I'm not sure I did this correctly. I'm going by the 7 letters make the 7 lines. And Pastoral as meaning a country scene or way of life. I would like it if someone could give me their opinion if it's correct. Thank you

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Kristin Reynolds

Date: 10/17/2008 7:08:00 PM

Congrats on your win, hun = a compassionate write, love Kristin

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/17/2008 1:16:00 PM

Congratulations dear Michael on your win in Brian's contest! One of my favorites! Love, Shar

Laura Mckenzie

Date: 10/17/2008 10:06:00 AM

Michael well done ,Congratulations on your win in the Fulton contest! Laura :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 10/17/2008 8:57:00 AM

This poem caught me right from the beginning with it's unique subject! Congratulations, Michael..this was a winner! ~ Carrie

John Heck

Date: 10/17/2008 8:29:00 AM

Michael - Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest. The message in this fulton is superb! Peace always, John

Date: 10/17/2008 8:23:00 AM

Hi Michael, I just wanted to drop by and add congratulation on being one of the winners in Brian's Fulton contest to my other comment. This poem is well-written and deserving of the honor. Thank you for your ongoing support. Blessings to you. Karen

Monk Frost

Date: 10/13/2008 9:46:00 PM

Awsome Words Slam Dunk

Elaine George

Date: 10/6/2008 2:18:00 PM

AWESOME! Perfect form with vivid pictures and universal meaning. also, thank you so much for all your comments on my writing, Michael. Love, lainie

Brian Strand

Date: 10/5/2008 8:17:00 AM

Hi Michael, I conceived the fulton with a pastoral /nature theme as a picture poem, in tribute to the artist of that name,but poetry form is a living form and I see no objection to it use with other themes ,as the inspiration leads so to say! Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments & kind words on my postings.

Date: 10/4/2008 11:09:00 AM

Good depth in this poem--you did it in just seven words. Love the message. The only thing I'm not sure about is the omission of the apostrophe in Autumns. Maybe in this short format it is unnecessary. Good job with this one. Thank you for your kind words on my haiku. Karen

Heidie Buys

Date: 10/3/2008 3:35:00 PM

Very clever and well written. Love Heidie

Deneen White

Date: 10/3/2008 3:29:00 PM

hi Michael, I like this write, although different, different still can be good, nice write take care D-ncye

Sean Kelly

Date: 10/2/2008 9:46:00 AM

I like this new format , and YES , Michael , you have a 1st class presentation ... Well done...

Adell Foster

Date: 10/2/2008 8:09:00 AM

It makes perfect sense to me Michael, I'm just trying out the technique myself :-) I love the imagery of this poem... Good luck with the contest my friend. God's Love and Many Blessings, Always, Adell

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/2/2008 6:44:00 AM

Thank you for your kind words Michael..See..."We are The Generation" was written to capture the irresponsibility mostly all people of this Generation carry...The superficiality, the interest in Gossip, hideous music and the many things called nonsense...I have written this based on my judgement of the ones that surround me and on a little research on the majority all over the world...It's a shame really..how value now lies not in what IS valuable...

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/2/2008 6:44:00 AM

I live in the United Arab Emirates (The famous Dubai)..and this country joins sooo many different nationalities and races.. which was enough for me to judge

Farah Chamma

Date: 10/2/2008 6:27:00 AM

A great try with a new form..Thank you for sharing Mike...Always... Farah

Sharon Winter

Date: 10/2/2008 4:38:00 AM

Wow! You did an awesome job with this form! You are seriously on a roll! Totally excellent! Love, Shar

Brian Strand

Date: 10/1/2008 11:59:00 PM

Your'e on the ball Michael.They can be 4 lines of 4 four letters or 5 of 5 ,6 of 6 ,7 of 7 (like your)and so forth with a nature/pastoral theme.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments on my postings