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Beat Surrender - Lyrics by Jam, The


Lyrics

Beat surrender -
Come on boy, come on girl
Succumb to the beat surrender
All the things that i care about (are packed into one punch)
All the things that i'm not sure about (are sorted out at once)

And as it was in the beginning, so shall it be in the end
That bullshit is bullshit, it just goes by different names

All the things that i shout about (but never act upon)
All the courage and the dreams that i have
(but seem to wait so long)
My doubt is cast aside, watch phonies run to hide
The dignified don't even enter in the game

And if you feel there's no passion
No quality sensation
Seize the young determination
Show the fakers you ain't foolin'
You'll see me come runnin'
To the sound of your strummin'
Fill my heart with joy and gladness
I've lived too long in shadows of sadness







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