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instantly the feeling changes and I start breathing fast oh no don’t do this, I swear I won’t get upset I got to try and keep myself together Jesus its getting worst I’m starting to sweat I promised myself I would not be drawn back to that state but why did he cross the line and mention my mother I love my family, my friends for being a part of my life but don’t disrespect the woman I love like no other I hated when someone mentions her in an argument but I said come on I’m strong those are just words but I don’t think Mohammad Ali could do better the first punch had me seeing nothing birds I laid there on my back for awhile thinking what to do next then I jumped up quickly on my feet I quickly pulled my gun from my waist and pointed it because I swore to myself I would never take defeat what I am about to say to you, you just might not believe but whilst standing there the lord spoke into my ears and reminded me of the seventh commandment thou shall not kill I only felt when the gun drop from my hands and I broke into tears the man stood there realizing a miracle had took place quickly looked up, fell to his knees and started to pray remember someone more powerful directs your life and no matter who you are he takes control any day so do good my friends and walk with the lord thy god do not be tricked by the devil and in the end be slaved but instead read the lords teaching and do good brethren its time to repent of your dirtiest sins and be saved By: Marlon A Malcolm
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