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She’s a good girl - a lyrical collaboration with Darren White She’s a good girl But she tries too hard And it just don’t get her anywhere Living her life in another’s shadow Wasting her time in the short and narrow She’s unhappy And she cries too much In her heart she’s feeling every pain Take pity for she won’t be here too long Everything’s wrong But can't she see, can't she see That the one to cure herself is she She's alone, all alone And she let's him treat her like she's obsolete For she feels incomplete 'cause She’s a sad girl On this summer night When the moon ain’t shining anymore Wanders alone in her desolation Stares at the sky for some consolation She is lost now And she’s gone too far She can’t see it any other way Sitting alone as her heart is breaking Saying goodbye to the steps she’s taking Come on fly, come on fly She makes her peace, says the suckers of this world goodbye Doesn't do small, for she wants it all Nothing left there for her, sees the world in a blur She's a soul in transfer, Oh! She’s a good girl And she’s found her way She don’t need his loving anymore She can go on with her life now cheerful Leaving behind all the feelings fearful She is smiling And her world is happy Nothing else now standing in her way Knowing that soon she will find affection She can rely on her own direction She can rely on her own direction She’s moving on Darren sent me a verse this morning to see if I wanted to add to it and I told him I had the song “Rich Girl” by Hall and Oates stuck in my head and I couldn’t write to his verse. So he said, then write something based on the melody and let’s work with that. So here it is. Written to the tune of “Rich Girl” by Hall and Oates
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