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this is more than a feeling; Life's struggle like a fishing line; I am a fish reality got me hook, line and sinker; Reeling I struggle to hold on like a mountain climber; These rocks got me, tripping me up; Lose my balance it all over; My life, I breath Nothing left. . . right.. no NO Really through my eyes I see; And my hands I feel all the toggle bolts holding me together; Reeling I struggle to hold on like a mountain climber; Fever, pitched in pains like I'm living in the ER; Holding on to negativity, while you regulate my reality; My life, I breath Nothing left... right no NO Really True love without God isn't love, really true faith without believing isn't, really the reality of life is that working on a job; is part of sin nature? yes really, really; Because Adam took a fall, sincerely yeah really? Did you call your parents today? Did you hug someone, say good morning? Really Did you smile or grin? Did you welcome someone in? Did you help someone out? this is more, than a feeling; Likes a struggle like a fishing line; I'm a fish reality got me hook line and sinker; reeling I struggle to hold on like a mountain climber; these rocks got me tripping up; lose my balance and it's all over; I'm all over the land.. divided, dying death dead... this is what's said, they will say Really my life I breath Really through my eyes I see Really Gonna be real, not fake nor intercession; this is my confession Really Did you greet someone in Kind? Were you good though in your mind. . . Really did you laugh at the vulgar joke, No Let's be honest, really Did you reprimand you child? or did you spare the rod; While driving in your car; Did you give the young-lady a nod? Really Did you hug/kiss your spouse today? Did you give that passer by an evil-eye make a child cry? Well did you? well Really when's the last time you've been to church is no when... Really, really; When's the last time you held the door open for a (girl/)woman? When's the last time you cooked a home cook meal for your husband? Really, really! Did you let the sun go down? And you're still mad, at someone!! Really Did you make fun of someone because you though you looked better than them? Did you acknowledge that you have more than. . . Really what about their feeling; yes, there're yes they too are only human; but God has created us all... Really! the short the small the mighty the fall (fallen) the timid, the proud, the meek and humble the loud In reality, actually to see things as they are genuine or truly yes in deed.. better watch yourselves mankind, yes you this is everyone man, woman, boy and girl, attitudes no gratitude's. . . In reality, actually to see things as they are genuine and true, deeds done once and for only... you think? Don't' know what your problem is; Your goodness in God's eyes is as filthy rags Really (taken form the forth coming anthology "Really" by James Edward Lee Sr.) 2017
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