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1 I sit with her on the river bank on the green grass on a summer day afternoon we sit under the trees, in the shade enjoying the breeze 2 then she reaches her hand to hold mine and be surprised that she is telling me while looking in my eyes, and in hers that glow "i love you" 3 " i love you" she said to me " i love you"?! why did she say to me " i love you"?! why me?! 4 I'm not the most handsome man nor the strongest nor the smartest nor the richest so why did she then say to me " i love you"?! 5 is she deceiving me?! but why is she deceiving me?! to have fun?! to have a thrilling story to tell her friends so all of them can laugh at that idiot that thought somebody like her would love him?! 6 the blood is boiling in my veins and my mind is on fire then i look at her, while I'm igniting while I'm burning and I'm about even to.... slap her on her face!! and tell her that i uncovered her plan that I'm not an idiot! 7 then i look at her and find that same glow in her eyes and she says to me again softly " i love you" 8 so between actions i see and intentions i deem i remain confused hesitant doubtful not knowing with what to answer 9 then i wonder at the devils of doubt and how can them ruin even the happiest moments in life
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