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Brick by brick she stumbled and crumbled, one roped to my ankle, as I drown- She sits as I stand. I cry and take her hand. She makes excuses, I enable again. For I knew I was losing my best friend. Brick by brick she cracks like cement, rubble under her toes like glass shards- One prick from her sharp pain, I tumble. Gone insane. No life remains. She tells lies, I believe with trust. She thinks her masquerade, is a longing must. She cussed, I fussed. A crimson red stone, left me alone as I condone her behavior- mortar began to m e l t and anguish I felt, left barren and alone... her own life she could never savor. I tried to do a favor, to heaven she was blown, like a onyx raven, she has flown. She needed love to survive, I tried to keep her to stay alive- She longed for motivation, I longed for a different situation. Her life... severe annihilation. Flowers in her rank hospital room, I knew soon she’d feed off hell’s doom- My world ended when she turned gloom, now I inhale the blazing fire fume. Suicide took her from me, brick by brick she longed to be free- A sad story told as she crumbled and stumbled, I prayed as her brick brought me to my knees. My favorite song is "Brick" by Ben Folds Five It's about a man who loves a girl who is severely depressed. He tries to help her in every way, but in the end it just wasn't enough. She felt taking her life was the only option. April 25, 2017
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