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Stepping out of time I tried to make you jealous As it slowly broke my heart Every time the music played it tore my soul apart As I walked in the room I put on my biggest smile The love songs I wished were ours played on the DJ,s dial The music had a sultry beat the night had a subtle glow Strong hands held me oh so close Yet it was you're love I wished to know All the time I danced with him You coulda tapped his shoulder I tried so hard to make you jealous in hopes it would make you bolder But step by step you walked away with each step it broke my heart every beat that the music played slowly ripped my soul apart He expressed words I wished were yours beautiful words whispered in my ear Yet as we circled round the room it was only you I wanted near My thoughts of you they lingered with each song I slowly died I longed for your familiar hands if only you had tried I wanted to make you jealous Step by step you walked away my strategy it backfired I wish I could reclaim yesterday! Chuck Melugin wrote a piece titled "One Song at a Time" that I quite enjoyed. I thought what if like most men we don't have a clue what is going through a woman's mind. So I wrote this piece from the woman's perspective. Ladies, I hope I have done okay here. Chuck I hope I have not been to bold by expanding on your amazing write.
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