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I looked across the bar and saw her with light golden green eyes and a hint of blue, as the dim lit atmosphere stained them she correspondingly turned The world then froze as our eyes met for the first time, the stars didn't gleam and the sun didn't shine She was a beautiful white rose from head to toe I blinked and as my eyes opened I thought I saw a halo, I closed my eyes then opened them again and there was nothing but she remained She had a smile like the sunrise and eyes like the sunset Her hair moved softly as if the wind was embracing it, complimented by her soft cloudy cheeks Her body was full of life and every curve made me realize there was a God and his work is perfection without any mistakes As she walked toward me I could see the wind move, flowers breathe, hear hearts beat, and thoughts speak As she approached me I tucked away all my nervous feelings in my back pocket to pull out all the chivalry and charm I had left I placed my hand out to hold hers for my introduction, but as soon as I did the conclusion came running She pulled back, her phone was ringing, so she frantically grabbed her purse and walked away I guess it wasn’t time to meet my future God was calling her back to heaven, but when she left brushes of dust fell from the rush p.s. until we meet again I will strive to be the best man for my angel sent from heaven…THIS IS JUST A POST SCRIPT
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