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the m u s i c took CONTROL our heartbeats replaced by B A S S breathing substituted by humming and s c a t t e r e d familiar lyrics bodies moving involuntarily yet seamlessly to the perfect precisely tweaked set almost feeling as if time stood still anything ( outside ) this magical breathtaking place temporarily ceased to exist this moment in its raw entirety was destined to happen right here and right now is where we were all meant to be it seemed as though this natural phenomenon was made for this a protected little ( nook ) in this crazy world created for these very instants Overlooking a bustling city sparkling with life anticipation and r e a l i t y close enough to feel the chaos yet far enough away to still appear stunningly serene surrounded by rocks lined with history memories and uniquely beautiful experiences Lorin’s music intermingling with legendary performers reverb e r a t i n g all around us beams of all colors wildly lit up the crowd highlighting thousands of snapshots of happiness and love the crowd joined together willingly connecting in an unspoken effortless undivided bond that ran deep devoid of judgment hate and negativity – genuinely vibing out not only to the mesmerizing m e l o d i e s but to the belief of TRUE -- harmony admiration music respect wanderlust acceptance hope & comm UNITY no one I’d rather create or share this purely exhilarating experience with then you – my best friend & the love of my life I was holding your hand - you were holding my heart – the crowd holding us up – the music letting us let go of it all I fell in love at that moment with that moment with this place this music this sensation this connection with you when the music stopped and the awestruck souls filed out you could still feel and see the BASS the energy encircling us all of us taken on an unforgettable unrepeatable indescribable trip – somehow forever touching each and every one of us binding us for eternity --- in this love in this encounter --- flawlessly mind blowing exquisite once in a lifetime night place.time.people.music.love.unity.feeling.wandering.curious.connected. you & me against the world. BASSHEADS.
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