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I been there when you decided to pick up a pen, When your thoughts run out in the ink sun, You decided to walk out when I told you got this then, Dan I believe in you sun, you got talent that's needs improvement, They say you won't make it but I seen what you done, The words express sun run in the mind, Now lately you been missing son, You're hard to find. Please don't back down now you're here, Look around your writing has brong, Your talent is showing but the topics are long, An all I see is fear here in the castle, Why Aquarius abandon the tri, A plot to rebuild the great oh why, a Capture Capsule Cap your sands of time, Now your pacing to carpet diem Racing in a different direction not my way, I mean you need to slow down and chill, Time is speaking loud sound the alarm, Your underrated but to me your my favorite, For your poems relate lately I been down, I feel depression is walking in again, I cheer myself up with your writing, But you too are facing borderline depression waiting to break, To feel atlas punishment again, To feel lonely in the wake, Sleep feels better mate but wait life is much better living, Then being depress Dan you used to be the man, Now I see you as pathetic loser who lost his drive. Lately I been writing to you, trying to talk to you, No reply on none of your media sites, For months your pissing me off for I want to meet you, My girlfriend Will love it too she'll do anything, Trust me I seen but ain't what I'm thinking to say, You probably think I'm guy for that line, Rewind back I can show you the brighter side, Open up your eyes to beautiful bright skies, This world with no lies that lie in the mouth of our young, Decide To choose but not suicide dude. I'm Your one fan who writes to you, I'm Your one fan who sees the insensitive, I'm Your one fan who wishes we talk, I'm Your one fan who writes to you but your unaware of it in your work, I'm Your one fan who's right in front of you but Your busy not paying attention. Written: 2/16/16
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