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In another dream I found myself on Captain Jesus' noble galleon. "What's the matter little one?" Jesus asked me as He stood beside me. "I try to fit in down here but I don't feel like I do. It's beautiful on this earth, yet it seems that people forget they need to take care of what is given them." "My girl you seem to have the weight of the world on your mind. It's not for you to bear," my Jesus said with a soft chuckle. Then I was treated to a vision that was already inside this dreamland place. I saw my self laughing a joyous laugh, perfectly happy and perfectly at peace. I saw God's beautiful sapphire blue earth. There seem to be a lot of sadness in that place that ought not be there. I am a scribe of sorts and am instructed to record what is shown to me. Then I found myself in a different vision, a place that I had been too; it was North Star in Lake Tahoe. During a certain evening there... there was a heavy snow storm which had knocked out the cabin's electricity. Yet this cabin had a huge central fireplace located in the mid-upper floor. Though it was dark, this central room was aglow with bright orange flames that came from the crackling fire. Everyone there was warmed. One of my aunts who was there had the forethought to light some candles then placed these candles randomly throughout this room. These candles also helped to illuminate the room's darkness and create a warm,loving atmosphere. Now the room of the cabin was special in another way because it had large, high set windows. These window had red curtains which were completely drawn back. My loved ones and I had an incredible view of the large forest outside... a breathtaking view. We could see the large pine and fir trees outside these windows. The trees had a light mantle of snow which clung on the tree's branches. You could even see large snowflakes accumulating on top of the snow that was already on the ground. Even though it was dark outside and snowing, there was still part of the sky which was still clear... and just clear enough that the moon's beams shown down over this forest's scene. My loved ones and myself, could not take our eyes off the trees as they seemed to dance under a different light... an unearthly light. In that moment I knew, I believe we all knew God was there. I awoke again from that part of the vision to see that I was still on Captain Jesus' galleon, I was still full of happiness. Ah looks like I am out of room, so for now I will leave you all with that!
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