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It wasn’t that I’d done you wrong I'd welcomed you into my heart’s home I'd cherished you and I had fed you I'd protected you I had let you dream your dreams in comfort in safety and I had loved you: You were my own And yet…. day upon day, you waited for the opportunity to confess knowing it would kill me knowing I would bleed... you had a perverse pleasure in planning…. the murder my heart and I never had a clue I trusted you You planned…you observed and all the while you smiled acting sweet and caring checking on me making sure my needs were met And then out of nowhere like lightning you struck my unsuspecting heart rammed the dagger in deep and twisted t*w*i*s*t*e*d to make sure every drop of blood was spilt Satisfied and sure of yourself you hid your gruesome work underneath layers of indifference buried or.... so you thought but every now and then you hear it I know….I can see it on your face You hear the beating of my heart- my tell-tale heart it still beats for you It’s still ALIVE! You try to deaden it the noise It’s driving you mad as you wine and dine her You try to make love to her more vigorously than before more often more intensely but as she is screaming your name begging you for more in the crescendo of passion You hear it... It's the beating of my heart It drowns out her voice It drowns out everything It pounds in your head My love is not dead You can’t go on enraged, seething you leave her wanting as you run out of the room bellowing… “STOP IT! I hear your cry I killed your love Why do you still haunt me?” Beat after beat after beat after...b..e..a..t.... My heart is still alive You feel it You are drawn to it She notices They notice You are agitated Something is driving you mad It’s me You remember my goodness My smile...my bed...my scent my love...my body...my warmth That pounding in your head is desire for....me It gets louder…LOUDER As you walk over to where I stand with each quickened step the pounding intensifies Surely everyone must hear it You come closer the indifference gone from your face Love...Passion...Repentance I hear the beating thundering in my own ears my love for you You are closer you put your head on my chest as your tears wet my blouse I run my hands through your hair pressing you closer I whisper… “Listen… My Tell-Tale heart Is still beating for you!” For Tommy's Poe Contest A remaking of the Tell-Tale Heart story
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