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MY SHORTCOMINGS ARE OVERWHELMING - HOWEVER MY STRENGTHS ARE DEFEATING THEM - POETRY CONTEST

I stood there,
...slowly...
I removed my clothes...
you could tell that my date who was 
about to see me naked for the first time 
was...was...well...EXCITED!
I was worried she would slide off her seat.

shirt?
gone!
sexy...

pants?
gone!
sexy...

one piece
long underwear?

an obvious crowd pleaser
I did not time it
but it was a long time
for her to get over her joy.
at one point I think she stopped breathing
she was definitely moved
there were tears in her eyes
I believe her hysteria was a nervous laugh
she was laughing
hard.

long underwear?
gone!

finally naked
I stood there exposed
the look on her face 
was not good,
I am sure I could hear,
a song blaring loudly in her mind
"Is that all there is, is that all there is..."

My shortcomings are overwhelming,

I was embarrassed 
I was angry

I wanted to be mature about the situation,
immediately,
instantly,
I stuck my tongue out at her,
my twelve inch tongue,
I think she noticed I could breathe through my ears
her face lit up 
once again she fell off her seat

My shortcomings are overwhelming,

both naked I started pleasing her
she yells 
"there is a God!"

However my strengths are defeating them.

that's it,

Ok 

you can leave now,

Goodbye

excuse me this next part is private,

LEAVE!


17~10~2014

I am entering this write in the contest.
When I saw the title of the contest this came to mind.
I thought humor being my greatest strenght I would 
write this in an attempt to overcome my deppression
thank you for the oppurtunity Verena.

Laughter is the best medicine...unless your a diabetic...
....and then insulin...insulin is the best medicine.


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