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Take me Away, Alive or Awake by ~CrimsonSmolder In the lands of consumption On the edge that is so narrow Take me away; alive or awake Take me away; by force or compulsion Oh malicious being you.. Capture me whole and breathing Drug me high And pain me less And you shall gain What other lacked to impress In a room so velvet Blood is mistaken for carpet Curtains turn to shadows Take me there; Alive or awake Lay me down on a bed of roses In a dress of scarlet and pale light black With hair so curly that shines solid lust Where candles are lit and halos are exposed Drug me high To pain me less As I stare in those passionate eyes of black Genuine, yet unveiling As the drug gives me nausea but keeps me awake I Lay so still, so wordless As you rid me from my clothes slowly and gently And I just stare into those exquisite eyes of yours Lashes as dark and long I stare onto that black soft hair As it falls perfectly to all sides That built muscular rigid torso and lean abs That open shirt of yours waiting for the skin to expose You put yours hands to my sides Tough yet it feels so soft As you enter me whole Introducing feelings of excitement, of tension, of delight Yet I still lay motionless and still With eyes so indifferent And a heart beating so fast And yet you pause, and produce a dagger Hidden in thee black silk Its poison, peering silver, visible at the hilt I notice, but no reaction follows You pierce me lightly in the neck and breast Slipping it lightly, yet in some places deeper into the skin You lower your aim and strike it slowly yet smotherly to my stomach A bit of blood escapes my mouth; you wipe it tentatively with your hand You aim lower, cut deep into the abdomen Yet you continue to kiss me, and caress my check, leaving scars of red everywhere Droplets of a beautiful color ooze soothingly from thee cuts A feeling of lust consumes me A rage of vulnerability conquers me A sick pleasure overwhelms me I try. I will. And I produce all might to put my hands behind your neck My legs around your waist And I kiss you and love you And sense fades yet the heart still wants Still lusts, still orders Yet the blood continues to pour The body begins to suffer And pain a bit I begin to sense As I wince, surrendering my arms to my chest There's a 2nd part, please do read it c:
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