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(this is a type of quatrain called Swap Quatrain, wherein the fourth line of each stanza is actually the first line, just swapped around) Another Time, long long ago, there was no Rain; there was no Snow. No reason was there, and no rhyme long long ago, another Time. A desert only, lifeless land - boulders, pebbles, grains of sand; hot and windswept, barren, lonely lifeless land; a desert only. From Sky was tossed one day, a seed onto this land so much in need, whose dreariness would soon be lost. One day a seed from Sky was tossed. In Sun’s bright heat, the small seed grew until an egg it changed into. It needed only moisture sweet. The small seed grew in Sun’s bright heat. Sky clapped loud sound; a bird appeared. The egg was pulsing as she neared. White feathers fluttered to the ground. A bird appeared; Sky clapped loud sound. As Rain came down. . . A sudden change! The bird turned into something strange - A lovely girl with feathered gown! A sudden change as Rain came down. With Rain’s soft fall, the egg had burst. Emerging from the egg came first One horse, then two. Fantastical! The egg had burst with Rain’s soft fall. The horses grew beneath big Sun. They thrived; with Rain they were as one. Along with her, like Wind, they’d run. Beneath big Sun, the horses grew. Twin beasts and Rain, that dry land’s three became a new world’s trinity. And with them, green and springtime came. That dry land’s three: twin beasts and Rain. With so much spring, with Rain’s pure grace came poetry into that place. Bright flowers bloomed when she would sing with Rain’s pure grace, with so much spring. Variety, the needful thing, Rain prayed out loud for Sky to bring. And so was born for her to see: the needful thing, Variety! Then came down Snow from up above. This counterpart was Rain’s true love. When white Snow ebbed, sweet Rain would flow. From up above, then came down Snow. Sweet Rain, white Snow, atop each horse, still ride the land and set the course of when their seasons come and go. Atop each horse, sweet Rain, white Snow. By Andrea Dietrich Inspired by A Rambling Poet's Contest: "Rain: the Story"
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